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Pearl (Chapter 8) - Thu 15 Nov 2018

I was very surprised by the Isolation room.  Considering most of the division are youkai I would assume they would get the bodies out in a few days instead of weeks or months.


Alashia (Chapter 8) - Wed 14 Nov 2018

Very interesting. Can't for the next update. 


ashuhhleey (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Good story, but I do wish you weren't developing Sesshomaru's feelings so soon. How long has Kagome been working for him? A few days? I think it's too soon to start having feelings for her already. I was hoping that his feelings would slowly start developing after spending more time together. Then maybe, something happens to Kagome where she nearly looses her life, and that's when he realizes his feelings for her. Just a thought. You don't have to listen to me, you can write your story however you want. I was just surprised that Sesshomaru was having these feelings already very early in the story. Well continue writing, because I really am enjoying it.


Neelixonee (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

I only wonder thatbif they are youkai, why not purify them to ash...or is it since they are dead there is nothing, no soul, to purify?  But then again she took a jewel shard from that scorpion demon in the show and it purified.  Isolation room rules: no purification?


Dawn Peyser (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

I love the way the story is going.  Love to see the next chapter. Maybe a night out with her team all dressed up in a sexy black dress.


Faith (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Oh wow yeah that definitely surprised me. I thought it was going to be 48 hours solitary confinment, which is certainly awful, especially for someone as social as Kagome. This is bad in a completely different way. I don't think I could bear it personally.

 

Also lol @ jealous Sesshoumaru and stubborn Kagome!

Looking forward to the next chapter!


Blommie8 (Chapter 8) - Tue 13 Nov 2018
i never thought that someone will clean the decayed body... isn't there any cell keeper? i hope the romance will blooming soon..

Deana (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

I love this stry and whether or not you get the reviews you want, please don't abandon it.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

Another awesome chapter.

I wonder if Noboru is an off-shoot of Naraku?  Or maybe it could be Naraku himself but then how would he have survived?

I like your characterization of Kagome.  I love a strong Kagome.  :)

Keep up the great writing.

Loving the story. :)

Cheers!!!


KyraTekak (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

Really interesting story


Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

Oye vey. What a supenseful chapter. Sorry, Kagome. Hope you like isolation....


Black Phoenix (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

I. Am. HOOKED.

 


VS (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

Hello,

this chapter had my heart racing! I like that you give your OCs their own personality and history. Reading about Hiraku's was sad but nice. At least his attitude can be kind of "justified". Though I believe Kagome finally opened his eyes. We should not only think about what we have lost, more important is what we have!

I'm so afraid about Kagome. Being just in an isolated room seems not enougj as a punishment. So the question is what will happen in this room.

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Toni (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

love this story  really looking forward to more chapters 


KEdakumi (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

So the rebels know all about zero division?  What did the officer know about Kagome that he passed on?

Kagome sure is jumping out of windows a lot :D

Can't wait to see where this goes 


blommie8 (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

blueanimegeek (Chapter 6) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

I love that Kags is still "innocent" but bad ass when she needs to be!! 

 

 


Faith (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Hmmm, I think proper proceedure would have been for Kagome to call for backup and have the 2 that followed her arrested for threatening her. Nonetheless, the outcome of her staying with Sesshoumaru would have been the same, I'm sure. ??

 

Great chapter. I appreciate how often you update!


Blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

SmilingFool (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Another great chapter.  I really do like this story. One thing I have to tell you though the word youkai or yoki are like the word sheep even in plural. Youkais or Yokis is not a proper word.  Just thought you should know should you decide to fix your chapters.  


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