please update soon this is such an interesting story. . makes me want more. . update soon authorsama
Wow !! You know what I must give you sooooo much credit & props for this story , the storyline is really like no other I was on the edge of my seat the whole time . I kinda felt like I knew where it was going through the first few chaps but wow I really am impressed. This is for sure one of my tops stories just based off the idea , seriously I cannot put into words how amazing this is . Anywho great chap I can’t wait for the next update p.s keep up the great work !!
Oh my goodness! I was not expecting that. This really is a Halloween story. Sad but just a bit creep. Loved this.
best twist ever. so kagome talking with a ghost or she just imagine it? i hope she's fine
What a fascinating fic!!! Please continue! im really loving it so far!
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Dec 2018
It's a nice twist, but her suddenly forgetting why she was going to Tokyo is a bit of a head-scratcher. Have you seen The Others with Nicole Kidman? I think the suspense you built around this story is similar to that one, which is hard to do in writing vs a movie.
Wow this is an amazing chapter. I feel for Kagome because she lost her entire family.
Holy dang. I like the concept of this story and your characters' portrails (all in character!), your writing style keeps me captivaded and somber, I could feel the heavy atmosphere. Good thing the fic itself is not horribly sad, it feels light, as in a prelude for happy things to come in a sense. Or so I perceive it. I love it, and promise to keep an eye on it in hopes of an update each week, if not daily ;) Have a great day/evening!
Alison (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Dec 2018
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Danni (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Dec 2018
This story just gets crazier and crazier and I love it. every twist, and its so dark and sinister. Great job!
What in the what! Your story is fantastic! I honestly cant get enough and I'm dying for you to update!
Miss C (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Dec 2018
OMG!! I was not ready for that!!
Miss C (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Dec 2018
Bravo!!! I love the action at the end. Great story!!
R (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Dec 2018
Great chapter! Despite the foreshadowing I was still surprised. It’s all so sad l...the things we do forestall heartbreak and loss, which often includes hurting those we love; both are ‘guilty’ of fearing the pain in coping with their realities. Looking forward to seeing how this epic shift propels new momentum between them.
R (Chapter 6) - Sun 09 Dec 2018
Oh my goodness...this piece has genuinely given me the creeps! The plot is perfectly unique and eerie; I felt like I was holding my breath the whole time. I was a bit confused by Kagome’s waving with regards to Sesshoumaru, but I guess it also fits this whole mist-filled, creepy amnestic vibe of this town. I’m really excited for your updates; thank you for taking time to write such an exciting story!
Neelixonee (Chapter 6) - Sun 09 Dec 2018
Koga to the rescue!
Lorena (Chapter 6) - Sun 09 Dec 2018
This was too much, the overload of information still has me reeling I cant even really review beyond just saying that I'm eager to read what's next... I feel so sad right now, but happy that we received all this juicy information, and yet it is all gone again~ what about the village?
Oh wow, that was some chapter! I can't wait for the next!
Not another cliffhanger. ???? Everytime shots about to go down. The chaperc is over.
Wow. The story gets more complicated. What does Sesshoumaru want her for? I hope all the questions I have will be answered in the following chapters. Pls don't make her give in too quickly. I love her stubborn nature.
Keep up the great work.
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