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Blommie8 (Chapter 3) - Tue 23 Oct 2018

KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

This is really very clever. I’m not sure if she is being held there or stalked. Perhaps the rabbit was a dinner offering. The village seems to have some kind of sheilding around it. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Oh! How interesting! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Awesome chapter!

Excellent writing!!!


Kimmy (Chapter 3) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Oh my gosh! Amazing please update soon this will be a great chapter coming next I just know it. 


Myella (Chapter 2) - Sat 20 Oct 2018

Amazing story so far. Looking forward to the update. 

 


Lorena (Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

I am all about this! This town is so freaky, from the energy going in to the ppl, it no wonder kagome is out of sorts... and what about the phone signal, was that unnatural? I cant remember the genre of this story in my excitement,  but it seems like a "sacrifice a stranger " at first but then I thought it'd be Sesshomaru,  which is why everyone is cool with it- but why mention Kaede's body temperature? How did he know about the rabbit? Is he trying to entice her in her dreams because she's so wary in the day???


ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

Nice story so far. Not gonna lie... I'm side-eying kagome's family a bit. Their fam member is in an uptown town for two weeks working for a strange guy they don't know and none of them offer to spring her any cash to get home? They're dropping the ball big time.


Toni (Chapter 2) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

so great  this story keeps getting better and better  looking or wed to may more chapters 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

Hmm, somebody or something is making an offer of providing Kagome with the dead rabbit as food and maybe as a courting gesture.

I wonder if this village does not exist on any map.  It reminds me of an old classic movie called 'Brigadoon' about a village in Ireland or Scotland that appears every 100 years with it's people for a short while and a man stumbles across this place.  It is actually a nice musical with Gene Kelly in the lead, I think.

This is a great creepy chapter. A lot of mystery and scary creepy moments.

Looking forward to more updates soon.  Loving it.  Thanks for updating and sharing.

Excellent writing!!!

Cheers!!!


Neelixonee (Chapter 2) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

Awe, it provided her needs!


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 2) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

Aww. He was making sure she had food. This story makes you want more like those suspence shows. It builds up to a high point and then hold you there by the arm as you lean over the cliff.


S4toonee (Chapter 2) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

I am really going to love this story....and the plot begins to thicken.  Looking forward to updates.


Bruna (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

I loved this start, please keep up! <3


Cecilia (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Great work! Excitedly awaiting future chapters!!! Please don't stop!!


Blommie8 (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Minime (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Very intriguing. Is it like a ghost town I wonder?  Very nice start. Hope to read more chapters of this story. 

Keep up the good work.


Mulata (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Oh my God, she's so going to die. That was a great chap! Dying to read the next one!


Toni (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

this is a great story looking forward to more chapters 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Oct 2018

Awesome, another great story to read.  Mystery, horror and maybe romance...one of my favorite types of genre.

How would the mystery white dog be related to Sesshomaru, I wonder?  It seem to be too small to be him and besides he was driving with Rin.  Could it possibly be a child of his or a mate maybe...can't wait to find out.

I'm fascinated with it already and looking forward to another update soon.

Wonderful writing as usual!!!

 


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