Reviews for Unforgivable by Walter205

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Mary J Dolph (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

Too dark for me, but I'm sure many would agree that you have a well written story. I wish you luck on this tale and hope you write one I will be able to enjoy.


   No offense but some of us just can't read it, it's just too much wrong and hits too close to personal facts in ones life. Love your skill with the written word however.

Nile (Chapter 5) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

How sad for their family and for Kagome. My curiosity is still peaked. Thanks for updating!

Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Tue 02 Oct 2018
i hope sesshoumaru learn the truth and accept it...

Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Mon 01 Oct 2018

I’m looking forward to more!! Thanks for updating. I wonder how Sesshomaru will react. 

Blommie8 (Chapter 4) - Mon 01 Oct 2018

Drianax (Chapter 4) - Mon 01 Oct 2018

Interesting fic.  Pretty dark so far...will you b lightening it up?  Now that the Inu no Taisho has commiTed suicide, will Sess blame Kagome?  What will happen to her PTSD that I'm assuming she'll have? How will this all end?  Update soon!

sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

Gah!  I have been crying since Chapter 1. Keep it up.

Crimson Rose (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

I love your stories Walter but this ones a bit hard for me. As a parent I can understand InuTaisho’s pain but I don’t think I’d be able to do what he did. Hopefully when Sesshomaru finds out, he won’t do the same to her. i do feel sorry for Sess cause now he’s all alone. i do hope Sesshomaru will take care of Kagome but with this story I don’t know what will happen. T_T 

Jean (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

Oh my gosh, such a sad story. Really feel like Kags is going to be blamed for the wardens death even though she is the victim. 

However looking forward to the next chapter.

toni (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

Poor Kagome! I am bawling my eyes out with this intense chapter. 

trinity3000 (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

I feel like Touga took a cowards way out.  He suddenly realized that he had done something horrible and instead of facing up to it and somehow trying to make amends, he killed himself.  


It will be messed up if Muso's partner turned out to be Naraku.  That would mean that the 2 guys that killed Kagome's dad would both have raped her.


I guess it is up to Sesshomaru to set some things right.  I hope he can fix some of this mess.  At least punish the correct people.

Faith (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

I really would have appreciated some content warnings on this fic. The MA rating and "tragedy, angst" genre are nowhere near sufficient. I had no idea what I was getting into when I started reading this and I really really did not need to be taken to the places this had me revisiting. 


If you cafre at all to take recommendations to prevent harm to other survivors, please include, at the bare minimum, the following warnings:

Gang rape, victim blaming, suicide


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

It’s incredibly dark but I’m waiting on the next chapter anyway. I’m glad she didn’t suffer all night and I’m glad the guilt tore him up enough. Thanks for updating. 

Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

Holy crap that was incredibly intense!!! I want to say I’m glad Kagome didn’t suffer all night but those injuries. Gosh I’m so glad the guilt was eating him alive. I am SO eating on the next chapter here. Thanks for updating. 

merrrcurius (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

woahhhhhh the substance is thiiiiiick with this one. i'm so glad shippou and hojo came to her defense. what a twister dude! muso & then inutashio... man. it just got deep. i wonder how sesshou is going to react hearing that gunshot...i'm curious as to who & what betrayed hojo, too. he seems distant, not himself. he must have been hurt really bad :/

Inuyaoi (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

 "Signs of double penetration,"

I'm just, wow. I really don't know what to say about this other than you're going all in on dark. 

Nile (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

I'm definitely have been thrown for a loop. Always keeping us on our toes, right?

merrrcurius (Chapter 3) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

i thought it couldn't get any darker than the first chapter. boy, was i in for a surprise! you are an interesting writer. i like the darkness.

kyoandyuya (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Sep 2018

This is so sickening. I understand the fury behind Taisho, but this is just simply a demonstration why rape victims have a hard time speaking up. They get blamed and labelled as sluts despite animals forcing themselves on them. It's somehow their fault they get raped. As a story, I'm dumbfounded by this turn of events but unless Taisho's condition doesn't get rectified or Kagome given justice in one way or another, I'm dropping it. Looking at it in realistic setting, this is accurate it's so disturbing.

Doug (Chapter 3) - Tue 25 Sep 2018

Mr. Taisho excuses Inuyasha the rapist and blames Kagome for everything that befell Rin. So he will punish Kagome, a rape victim, by having her gang raped again. 


Why doesn't he just rape, torture and kill her himself? He is already committing a crime by setting her up to make this choice.


Has Mr. Taisho punished all of Rin's rapists? Did he track them down? Did he have them gang-raped? Why is he focusing on Kagome? Seems very odd and disturbing. Did Inuyasha learn how to mistreat and devalue women from him?


I know you write fics that teeter between dark and insane, but this is beyond disturbing. I agree with a couple of the readers, I'm dropping this fic too. 



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