Reviews for Unforgivable by Walter205

Page 1 of 3
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 Next > End >>
SmilingFool (Chapter 15) - Sat 19 Sep 2020

Wow so harsh, why doesn't Kagome stop and think before doing something so stupid....  Gesh hated seeing Hojo killed but that's what happens when idiots overlook the main plotline...  lol anyways hopefully Kagome ends up being fine with Sesshomaru as her savior.  Can't wait to read the next chapter....  

VS (Chapter 14) - Mon 06 Jul 2020

What an update, Walter! It seems that Kagome is not allowed to take a break. Just now where she received forgiveness from Rin and could make a significant step in her recovery that asshole Naraku had to ruin it, and those disgusting brats who were crying for their mommy let themselves be manipulated!

SessMama was amazing on so many levels! I just can't get behind the fact that she set her focus on Kagome and her healing and even sees her as her own daughter after all the loss she had to handle herself. Kagome comes first and that is admirable! I'm glad she was able to use her husband's weapon to protect herself and Kagome. She got some sort of satisfaction out of it and that is understandable.

I refuse to think myself into Kagome's situation for the sake of my own sanity. Terror! Will she even be able to trust any being -be it female or not- after this? I have no idea and I'm not even sure if there can be a "happy ending" to this story without playing all her suffering down...

This story is playing with all of my emotions and I love it!

VS (Chapter 12) - Sun 06 Jan 2019

What an interesting background story. So Naraku IS Onigumo after all...gosh how I hate him. And the worst is that he doesn't even see his actions as wrong. His only mistake is Kikyou? Please let him suffer, Walter!

I'm happy for Kagome. Rin has forgiven her officially now and I hope that it will help her to heal. Though Kagome is far too forgiving for her own good. And I hope she will not forgive Naraku as easily too! That would be really egoistic, after all many have suffered due to Naraku. Forgiving him wiuld mean playing down the suffering of ALL the victims.

I enjoy this story very much so far. Every chapter has a nee surprise in store.


I'm looking forward to your next update.

VS (Chapter 11) - Sun 06 Jan 2019


I like your characterization of SessMama so much in this one! When she was stating her opinion and thoughts in this chapter I was all the time like "Yes, that's it! Come on!".

My absolute favourite part of this chapter was in the end, when you used the word "unforgivable" and made a reference to the title of this story. It is NOT only Naraku or the players that have to be hold responsible. Not only they did something unforgivable, but the WHOLE town.

Corrupted to its roots indeed!

Loved it!

Though I'm not sure if moving away will be the right decision. And I can imagine that Kagome will refuse to leave.


Let's see where you will be going with this story!

sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 11) - Sat 05 Jan 2019

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!  Dying to know what happens next!

Bree (Chapter 8) - Fri 30 Nov 2018

I don’t often leave reviews, but I just finished chapter eight (new reader to your story), and holy. Freaking. Crow. I was *not* expecting that turn, and to stun me speechless in such a way is so significant that I simply had to drop a review. I’m thoroughly enjoying your story and will be clicking the “follow” button shortly. Thank you so much for this!

Cheyanna (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

I‘m looking forward to more!!!:) I hope Kagome agrees to leave though she has no reason to refuse and I’m glad the women came together to prove Kagome’s book true. I like Inukimi and I’m hoping Sesshomaru gets a hold of Naraku though Inukimi would probably utterly destroy him too. Thanks for updating! 

Cheyanna (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

I‘m looking forward to more!!!:) I hope Kagome agrees to leave though she has no reason to refuse and I’m glad the women came together to prove Kagome’s book true. I like Inukimi and I’m hoping Sesshomaru gets a hold of Naraku though Inukimi would probably utterly destroy him too. Thanks for updating! 

Skylar (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

Poor Kagome.

Blommie8 (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

VS (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Goodness, I have goosebumps all over. This scene, where all the females entered the hall, was just incredible! United girl power!!! I loved it! I was so afraid after Naraku told those lies. Afraid that no one is going to believe Kagome. Well, he think that he can hide forever? Let's see, asshole!

I'm super glad, that SessMama is so supportive. Kagome needs a female companion. And I was actually laughing, when she didn't let him group hug them! He was sulking! :D That was just funny!


I'm looking forward to your next update!

Cheyanna (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

I‘m so glad the townspeople know the truth. I hope they catch Naraku and give him what he deserves. I’m looking forward to more!

Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018
i like your story. how you make the rape's become so complicated. including a lot of murder and suicide. im sorry for kagome's mother and her brother. this rape case like a big epidemic.

demon13o (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Nov 2018

Wew, talk about dark ending to that chapter. Seems you have a grudge against Kagome, done beat up the poor thing. Time to add this story to my list and wait for the next chapter.

Zinhle (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Nov 2018

What a heartbreaking chapter. Thank you and please update some more.

Cheyanna (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

I’m looking forward to more!!:) This is so dark but I can’t help but want to read more! I’m glad she managed to use the gun too. 

VS (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Nov 2018


like his father Inuyasha took the cowardly way out. Now, that he was cured he had the opportunity to think about his actions and at least "try" to make amends. Yet, he decided to not only kill himself but this guy for Kagome too. Like that is something she would ever want. It just shows how little Inuyasha actually knows her!

I'm super angry with Houjo. Did he not say to Sesshoumaru that he can guarantee her security? Where were they when Kagome got attacked?! It seems that Houjo has just a big mouth.

It may sound strange, but I have to say that I'm glad that Kagome shot them. It shows that she finally developed a will to live. Though I was satisfied to read that Kouga isn't dead. That would be too easy. He should suffer a bit. I'm curious if Kagome will have the gut to confront him in the hospital?

Anyway, Kagome has nobody in this world now except of Sesshoumaru. And I'm curious to read what will happen next! 

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Afterthought: what kind of f*ed up city is this? They are going to be angry at Kagome because Kouga is their only successful player?! What?! I do want to know what the media is going to say. And if Sesshoumaru is going to make a public statement? Will he show the world that he is supporting Kagome? Will he go against the whole city? Questions after questions...I can't wait to read!

Sesskagaddict89 (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

This is such a dark story but I love it. Poor Kagome though. I really hope things start getting better. Update soon

Mira Bailey (Chapter 9) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Ya know it sick to take pleasure as Sesshomaru did in the fact that Kagome lost everyone in her family, while he at least he had someone. She is the victim .

waterwomen1414 (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Oct 2018

Before you mentioned that Sesshomaru would be taking responsibility for Kagome. I wonder how that is going to be implemented when they just allowed her to leave alone. Wish Inuyasha would have made a better turnaround but at least he did something right. 

Page 1 of 3
<< Start < Prev 1 2 3 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.