snow (Chapter 4) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

this is getting so good omg whats gonna happen next i hope kagome keeps the stones its hers by birth right! something has to happen to change everything now come on good plot twist!


oshay1000 (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

YYYYYEEEESSSS< they have finally met :)

 


SammyJams (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

Awh - a sweet way to end the chapter! I enjoyed this installment very much - just makes me

sad I have to wait so long between updates!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!


nicole (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

Update ten chapters please


nicole (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Updated 10 chapters please


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Oh no...you left me hanging with the cliffy.

Very interesting chapter but I knew you were going to leave us hanging with Kagome and Souta's first meeting  :)  lol

Cannot wait for the next chapter...you meanie.  LOL  :)

Really I can wait but not for long though.  :)

Excellent writing!!!

Cheers!!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 4) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Ah a new chapter.....  Finally... I actually like this story.  It's much different the normal which is a relief.  Sometimes you get bored with the same ol' plot liners even though the story is good.  Yours is awesome.  The only drawback is that there are no paragraphs.  Sometimes the lines blend in after reading awhile.  Perhaps I'm the only one that this happens to.  

But anyways love the story keep it up please and update soon.....er..  Hehe  Good work

 

 

 

 


snow (Chapter 3) - Thu 27 Sep 2018

this is getting soo good! I wonder what would happen now o.O


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 15 Sep 2018

Great chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!


SammyJams (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Sep 2018

Great update - can’t wait to read more! Hopefully there isn’t as long between updates!


Hexxe (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Sep 2018

Ok, so, I think I can understand, why Touga and Inukimi did, what they did. They probably didn't mean to be inconsiderate, but I feel like having (forcing?) Souta to be there when his relatives arrive (who weren't there for him, when he lost his family), is somehow humiliating, even though it is not meant to be.

So ... is it bad, that I feel a bit giddy about this Tournament? Because I'm pretty sure that Inukimi and Touga will make faces, when they realize, that the Lord, they thought they could drive into a corner and force a mating with his daughter, had an ace up his sleeve the whole time.

 

But I'm not sure about Kagome going alone. What if they notice her? What if they see this as kidnapping and declare war against the North, because obviously he can't give back the stones or Souta and the West mustn't know about Kagome (yet).

And ... I think, I like the Souta/Rin pairing. It sounds cute!


nicole (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Aug 2018

Update please i love the outline 


snow (Chapter 2) - Sun 26 Aug 2018

this is an interesting story looks really good :O, please keep updating your stories they are good!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Sat 18 Aug 2018

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!


Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Aug 2018

Interesting plot! Cant wait for more 


SammyJams (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jul 2018

Awesome first chapter - can’t wait for more! I enjoy how you add different mythologies into your writing. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jul 2018

Great story, please update the next chapter quickly!


Miranda-sama (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jul 2018

Very interesting start. I love the story about the star stones and also the drastic change between the happy family life at the beginning and the development and suspense at the end of the chapter. It‘s an amazing start to an intriguing story. Can‘t wait for the next chapter. I am curious what happened to Kagome‘s family and What will happen to Kagome in the Lord‘s care. 


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