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Vicky (Chapter 11) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

Love it! !  Please update again soon. Thank you 


Sessygurl (Chapter 11) - Thu 10 Jan 2019

I must say I love this Sesshoumaru. His quotes are perfect. You have captured him well. I love this story. One thing. She did not take the tea before he punished her. Could she be pregnant? Thanks for the update. 


Gee (Chapter 11) - Thu 10 Jan 2019

C'mon general. Don't be an ass. They'll have babies before you know it  


Doug (Chapter 11) - Thu 10 Jan 2019

I like the story and the romance especially in the beginning chapters when Sesshoumaru was preening like a peacock and dropping hints to a dense Kagome. I don't even mind the OCs except for that maid who seems desperate to hook up with Inuyasha.

 

But I'm confused as to why she is being pulled back  and forth between the past and the future? Who is doing the jerking around? What is the purpose behind this  unexpected time traveling?

 

Why are certain objects acting like the well? The well has a unique power and was the sole time portal in the entire series. Who has the power to make ordinary objects like clothing act as time portals? Are the time jumps just a literary device to explain how Sesshoumaru will end up as one of the few remaining youkai in the future? Will future Sesshoumaru be embittered, alone and seemingly abandoned by the woman who claimed to love him?

 

The general, though tactless and rude, was right. Why would the Western Land need a lady who cannot be relied on to be there? Is this foreshadowing the fall of the West and youkai civilization because Sesshoumaru dared to make a human his mate? It doesn't seem fair to him and his people if his mate cannot be there once the land is attacked or overran by humans.

 

Where does her loyalties lie? She mated Sesshoumaru. He, Rin and the Western Lands come as a package. She has responsibilities as his mate and she knows youkai seemed nonexistent in the future. So what is she doing about it? She seems like a leaf being blown about hither and yon.

 

 

 


Anonymous (Chapter 11) - Thu 10 Jan 2019

Oh no!! Not again! Poor Sesshomaru. How long will it be this time?


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 11) - Thu 10 Jan 2019

Love love love love!!!


KayAkuma (Chapter 10) - Sun 06 Jan 2019

Ahhh! I've binge read this whole story up until here, and I love it! I cant wait for more!  I really love where you have taken this and didnt see these turns coming.


Koree (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Jan 2019

Wow the general is quite bold-.- great chap 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Tue 25 Dec 2018

Great story, please update the next chapters quickly! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!


Lady Nefertiti (Chapter 6) - Sun 23 Dec 2018

Great fanfic and well done. enjoying every chapter ;) 


Krista (Chapter 10) - Sat 22 Dec 2018

Oh, what!? Nooooo! I don't like this Kaito dick at all lmao I can't wait to read more!


Lady Nefertiti (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Dec 2018

I just read the first chapter and I'm already loving it. will let you know as I read on ;) 


Skylar (Chapter 10) - Fri 21 Dec 2018

Kaito! You need a swift kick where the sun don't shine.


Neelixonee (Chapter 10) - Fri 21 Dec 2018

Oh snap!  


Sessygurl (Chapter 10) - Fri 21 Dec 2018

Wow he is quite ballzy. I would put his ass in his place. However he does have a point but for her its has not been 50 years. Gah. Love this story so much. Thanks for the update. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Thu 20 Dec 2018

There is always an interfering busybody. Things are changing in their world and some of them don’t want to see that. Time for Sessh to get control of him. Nice update. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Thu 20 Dec 2018

My heart just broke. Such a beautiful chapter. 


Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 10) - Thu 20 Dec 2018

Hu hu hu hu? What's going on?! Who are you to demand that?! Dude there is so ml uch going on now. Soooooo much delicious bits and pieces longing to be reunited. Keep it coming. Bless you writer and may your fingers type true.


Faith (Chapter 10) - Thu 20 Dec 2018

Grrr! Meddling asshole hasn't a clue what his Lord and the lands need!

 

I hope that there's some stability and resolution for Kagome and Sesshoumaru soon. This has been a very sad few chapters. 

 

Oh and Inuyasha's still stuck in the future!!!


Koree (Chapter 9) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

Wow :( this is reaply sad , I definitely wasn’t expecting Rin to be gone 


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