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Zinhle (Chapter 3) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

please update 


Sesskagaddict89 (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Sep 2018

Can't wait for more


VS (Chapter 3) - Sat 30 Jun 2018

Hello,

happy belated birthday! I absolutely loved Jakotsu in this chapter, and I think he did a great job showing her another perspective! Also the background story is really interesting, Kagome growing up with this bunch of guys - I hope to read more about them. And the comment of Mama Fuji about having only two more chances to get Kagome into the family properly made me just laugh ... mothers ...!

I'm looking forward to see the Queen on action!

 


VS (Chapter 2) - Sat 30 Jun 2018

Hello,

I do believe that it was tactically a wise decision to skip this 10 years, otherwise it would be a bit akward...I like that you decided to let Inuyasha call her "Gome" and Sesshoumaru "Kagome". It shows that they never really saw her as a mother. Though I was not surprised that Inuyasha did the first step...he was always brash and acted without thinking :D

I would like to vote for a threesome version! There are not enough out there ;)

For her night job:
I remember seeing in an asian film a kind of restaurant were they didn't had plates and such stuff. The food was put upon a naked girl who was laying on the table. They were eating directly from her body...I'm not sure if this kind of thing has an actual name...

Anyways, I can imagine Kagome being the host of such an event. Maybe she is also responsible for the food?
She could have come in contact with this kind of stuff when she had been a student. So she started as a "table girl"(don't know how to name it) and this could have been the reason why the contact between her sister and herself ended. Afterwards she got the position as a host and is not participating anymore. You could even let this kind of event be an absolutely private one, where high politicans and business men/women meet.

Because Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are sought after students, they could have been invited to such a private event, where they saw Kagome.
You could let her get absolutely jealous, when she sees the boys eating food from a naked attractive woman. And than she has to think about her reasonings for getting jealous...a mother after all wouldn't get jealous.


I hope I could be of some help!


Koree (Chapter 3) - Mon 18 Jun 2018

Hmmmmm Jak I know what you’re up to lol


princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Thu 07 Jun 2018

Wow. So she's the queen of jaks club. Hmm I wonder who this date of hers is? It could be the boys because they know what she likes, down to her favorite food. It sounds like a blind date to me. It would be awesome if the guys posted some reply on a website that they heard about while kagome was on the phone. They can seem like the perfect guy for her to sango and miroku. Romantic dinner in a very posh restaurant with flower petals and candlelight. They both show up dressed to the nines with bunches of her favorite flower or flowers that show their true feelings for her.

 

Can't wait for the next chapter

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Marina (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jun 2018

Somehow I see a big fight breaking out when they realize what job she’s had for a while. Maybe not with her but all the guys near her. Lol


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Tue 05 Jun 2018

I am soooooo ready for the next chapter!!!!!! Thanks for the update!! Can’t wait to read the next chapter;)


Koree (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Apr 2018

Hm very interesting plot , looking forward to future chaps


Karichan (Chapter 2) - Sun 22 Apr 2018

And if you wanna be really really technical, Kagome is only a legal guardian not blood- not half blood. So it's all fair game. XD

Also, would Kagome's night job sensual or just embarrassing? It would be easier to know so ideas can flow better.

But a few ideas i got: stripper, sex caller (Don't know the actual name if someone does mention that please), regular hostess or bump her up to escort(make them boi's really bothered lol) or even working at some night (outaku)cafe that has really questionable cosplay outfits. That's just some ideas im throwing you don't have to take em, hopefully they just inspire you with something.

love what you're doing with this story, keep it up.

Ps. I feel so bad because i feel like i kno the BL you mention and reading this story did jog my memory but i don't remember the name. XD

 


DevaG (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

I don't see anything wrong with the way your story is heading. They are not her biological sons. Otherwise, I would have to say something about it lolol.. Do your thing. Enjoyed the chapter.

 

 


Bianca Abreau (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

I'm all for the three-way, I would hate to see one of them rejected in this story. In regards to Kagome's night job, I thought she would have something more demon and fighting related, like as a body guard or something, something that could be linked to her not aging. I have no idea if youkai are a thing in this AU though. In all honesty, Kagome's night job could be anything, but I don't really see her as a stripper, though that immediately pops into mind with a night job and cash, since her personality would not fit. Not is it something good to add to her character in this story. Ultimatly the choice is the author's to make and I am happily along for the ride. 


Ren (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

I love this development! Normally not a huge fan of InuYasha and Kagome love but cant turn down a threesome with him and and Sesshomaru. It's the thought of two gorgeous me loving a woman and protectively sharing her is so thrilling. To have them be brothers intensifies it! My vote would be threesome!

 

Night jobs could be anything but since she is in business she could have a higher up management position at a hospital? 


frances (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

If she doesn't want  the boys to know.... A lot of exotic dancers are simply dancing to pay for school and school loans


princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

Her night could be working as a chef in a very famous high-end restaurant that gets loads of press. No one knows who the chef is only that she appears during the night. No cells phones are allowed in the kitchen or restaurant. The Windows are tinted to keep the press from taking pictures. There could be a secret entrance from an old subway station, that leads into a tunnel that has a man hole cover right behind the restaurant. Kagome climbs out quietly and quickly looking like a hobo but with her proper clothes waiting for her inside.

She may have taken business but she secretly excelled in culinary arts, finishing first on her class and received a scholarship to a prestigious culinary school shortly after her graduation. She doesn't want the press knowing who she is or even looks like. The only person who knows is jakotsu perhaps, he owns the restaurant or it could be miroku and sango. They could have started it as something small but their chef fell ill or quit one night and kagome offered to cook for them and the rest is history. Famous people eat there, from diplomats to celebrities. This could be exciting having to deal with this secret and making sure the press can't tell any similarities between her bakery and the restaurant.

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

Wow this is getting interesting. So now what will they do because it seems kagome doesn't share their feelings or views on their relationship. Will they follow her out on her date?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Mari (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh a new chapter its so good I'm gonna die. I can't wait to see what she's hiding from them and ughhhh. I hope the threesome happens I'm not even ashamed.


Haven Himori (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Apr 2018

If it's something that she doesn't want the boys to find out about.....what If she was a stripper? Like when she first adopted the boys she had a financial issue and she took up stripping to help, but decided not to stop after the financial situation became better.


Fictional_Reality (Chapter 2) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

Very interesting story so far, but is this based on a BL manga, or is it just me? 


Monique (Chapter 2) - Mon 16 Apr 2018

Very interesting. loving the story can't wait for more... Her night job shold be escorting....


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