I can‘t wait to read more!!!!:)

damn, there’s a lot of good stories coming out it seems like. hers is one of them. i’m already hooked. can’t wait fer the next chapter! :D

This is an exciting and intriguing start to what I imagine will be an epic bit of adventure.  As far as I read, your English is superb.  The legend you created seemed seamless in its ability to fit into myth.  It has all the elements to make a good one... twarted love, a worthy villian, and a tragic event that sets the stage for further conflict in the future.  I will definately look forward to your development of this story.  Oh, and I especially liked your antagonistic interactions between Sesshomaru and his mother.  It is almost the perfect image in my mind of how they interact so thank you for that too *smile*

This is a good start to an intriguing story. It is very well written for it to be your first english written fic. There are a few minor spelling/grammatical errors but they did not interrupt the flow of the story, but other than that, I think you did a fanstatic job!!!

You have a very creative mind. I like the how you created the legend of the gods and their tears. You took real mythological facts, combined them with your own made up facts and came up with this delightful story.

I think somehow, Kagome has a connection with Amaterasu, which would be cool; that in itself would get Sesshomaru's attention since he loves power so much.  LOL  :)

I hope you keep this fic going and not abandon it....just because I like it.  :)

Excellent writing!!!

Welcome to Dokuga - hope to read many more stories from you

Cheers!!!

So it looks interesting. 

I liked it. The legend is very detailed and interesting. 

Why do I think Kagome is the child that was lost and she has the third stone.? Hm we'll see what happens next.

I wish you good luck with your fic, will be following it.