I like your story.
The last couple of chapters were harder to follow? Perhaps more detail about the scenes. What are the characters thinking? The transition from scene to scene jumps. I re-read a couple of times to try and fill in some gaps. The plot is good though, hope you update again soon.
Damn when is the next chapter?
nicole (Chapter 13) - Tue 27 Mar 2018
Shouldn't lagome reiki eliminates whats harming her and those with evil intent
Very interesting concept, I like where your going with this. I do feel like sometimes you should slow down you seem like your rushed to write all your ideas out before they disappear
Awesome update!
This is awesome great story that's for the updates
Lorena (Chapter 5) - Fri 05 Jan 2018
Oh man, I knew this wasn't right- I felt like they belonged together, but I didn't think it was on a soul level! Why is this Naraku situation happening again? If Rin's husband is really in love with her, I don't get why their baby would be Naraku? I'm think now that it was a failsafe of his to secure that he would continue onward, but it sucks for everyone
Oh damn!
Great start! Hope to see more soon!
I like this and I can't wait until you update!!!!!
Looks like this may be an interesting story. Nicely written.
What did you mean when you wrote that Kagome had no heart because she was not aging?
What kind of relationship did Kagome and Sesshomaru have?
Why did she have to bless Sesshomaru's mating or marriage to the eastern princess? Was the princess a human? That would be the only reason that Kagome would have to bless the marriage. It's my understanding that Mikos do not get involve with demon matings because they are demons natural enemies.
Update soon.
Cheers!!!
Looks interesting but a little short. Still looking forward to seeing more.
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