I am so enjoyimg your story. Very creative and well written. I await in anticipation for the next installment.
HI LOVE YOUR FANFIC .....CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE ITS GOING...LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE ... HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON.....GREAT WRITING SO FAR ....HOPE KAGS ISN'T HUMAN....MAYBE KAMI,OR ELEMENTAL,GODDESS, THE CHILD OF SOME DEITY PLACED WITH THE HIGURASHI FAMILY ,TO HIDE HER, TO PROTECT HER, OR POSSIBLY ADOPTED, MAYBE SHE WAS BORN IN THE PAST AND SENT TO THE FUTURE TO HIDE HER....MAYBE SHE HAS A SEAL, SPELL, OR AN ENCHANTMENT OR SOMETHING SUPPRESSING HER TRUE FORM .
Awesome chapter.
Poor Kagome and her fragile heart. Her sense of duty seems to out weigh her broken heart.
What doesn't kill her will make her strong.
Excellent writing!!!
Sesshomaru acted like and abusive boyfriend in this chapter. He hurt her physically and then he was sorry. He can't even blame his instincts since his beast was not on board with what he did. I hope she doesn't just wake up and forgive him. I hate when Kagome acts like a victim.
Natalia (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Apr 2018
I swear I read it twice! So beautiful and touching. Why oh why am I tourturing my own heart? You surprised me, I did believe she will wake up when he called, but no! Bravo! It's logical that shippo be the one to reach her. Please oh please update soon and don't let my heart hurt for too long wondering!
Thx for updating.
Take care!
I feel for Kagome, I hope when she wakes up Shipp? can cheer her up and gives Sessh?maru a good talking to when it comes to his mama.
Pleasse update soon
Waaaaaa. So sad at the end but it gave room for realizations. I love Sesshoumaru' s demon. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru is thinking as well as showing his instinctual side. I love this story. I cannot wait for more.
Dryft (Chapter 10) - Wed 04 Apr 2018
omg no sesshomaru you did not just say that.......
Jean (Chapter 10) - Mon 02 Apr 2018
I am loving your story so far. Your character are great with strong personalities and great plot. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Nice update.
I'm guessing that Sesshomaru's ally may be the tree demon Bokesnou (sp?), after all he knows just about everything there is now in the know world.
I think Kagome should reserve her righteous indignation until after they meet with Sessho's ally first.
I feel like there maybe a few unexpected surprises that awaits them both.
What a cliffy...please update soon, like maybe tomorrow....hahaha, just kidding. lol :)
Great job!!!
Great update. So now he wants her because he thinks she's no longer human, that's a mistake on his part. So is kagome going to reject him and his protection then seek out shippou and kei-sama on her own? Will sesshomaru accept her rejection or will there be a serious fight to keep her with him? I wonder if kagome can pull something unexpected and get enough distance between them to search for shippou. Or will kei and shippou show up in time to help out?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Marie (Chapter 10) - Wed 21 Mar 2018
Please please please suprise me with an update soon. That was a good want can't wait for what's next
Idiots! Him hello she has emotions everywhere plus you know what relationship she had with Inuyasha. Duh! Her; he is the Lord of the freaking West lady, what did you think! That he would willing be with a human. Ahhh. Their both stupid. However thsts what makes me love this. The both need to learn to express themselves. Plus he needs to know she does have other options if he does not want her. Just saying. I think his beast doesbt care though.
I'm sure he thinks what he said was okay, but it was so wrong on so many levels. I hope he gets it together before he pushes Kagome away. Her self esteem already seems really low and he just basically said that he only wants to be with her if his friend can find something extraordinary in her. Basically she is not good enough as she is. That's pretty messed up.
Please update soon!!!
Natalia (Chapter 10) - Wed 21 Mar 2018
Oh sesshoumaru you did not just say that! Guess some sparks will fly when Kagome will release her aura!
Why oh why did you stop here? Update soon please, I need to know what will happen!
Thx for the chapter!
This is good and I am looking forward to reading more
I absolutely love this!!!! The dynamic is so amazing and that cliff hanger got me dead!
HI. I LOVE HOW KAGS SMOKED THAT DEMON FOR INSULTING HER AND SESS.... THAT WAS GREAT...LOL....CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE .... LOOKING FORWARD TO THE UPDATE;;;;;; HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON .......IT'S BEEN A WHILE SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED... GLAD TO SEE YOU HAVEN'T GIVEN UP ON THE STORY.........................................TDANIEL
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