O! M! ! G! ! ! ! OXD
I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD
It! Is! ! AWESOME! ! ! ! OXD
(A couple small things: at the end of the show Sango and Miroku had three children, twin girls and a baby, though I don't remember if it says what gender the baby was. Given the timeline you made, Sango and Miroku could easily be expecting their 4th child, but you have them expecting their 2nd, this makes me VERY sad, because that means you erased one of the twins, and even though the twins only get a VERY short part in the last episode, that part made me absolutely ADORE them. Given that, that makes me super sad.
Now, it hasn't come up yet in the story, but in case it does in the future, I want to point something out ahead of time: Kagome's dominant hand is her right hand. She's right-handed. The proof is how she wields her bow and arrows. She holds the bow with her left and handles the arrows with her right.
There was a couple other little things, but I can't remember them at this moment. Which makes sense, since it is 11:30 at night. PM. Dark out. So, I will most likely make other comments, farther back, when I go through and reread at a letter date.)
This story is such a breath of fresh air! I read all the chapters in mere hours! I even checked your page for more stories. I haven't read and enjoyed a story like that in a long time! Keep up the good work!
VS (Chapter 13) - Mon 10 Sep 2018
Hello,
this is such a lovely chapter! And I'm so PROUD of little Shippo!!! He has a new tail *squeals* and is taking good care of his mother! He's like "let the grown men waste time with talking I will just do it myself".
And I absolutely adore Kei. I'm a super hard SessKag shipper, but with Kei...let's say that I wouldn't say no to a treesome pairing ;)
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Well, it is almost 4 in the morning here, I should be asleep now but I just couldn't stop reading! Wonderful story, I love seeing Shippo and Kagome like this and the interesting relationships they're making. I look forward to more!
I am really enjoying this story. Looking forward to updates.
Myella (Chapter 13) - Fri 07 Sep 2018
Thank you for the wonderful update. I keep looking for this story to be updated frequently. Looking forward to the next. :)
My that was a great chapter. I'm glad Kagome is finally awake maybe now her and Sesshomaru can have an actual talk instead of instincts talk. Wow what a sly fox we have...... boy oh boy Sesshomaru would have a feild day if he heard what was said.
Update soon love this story.
Myella (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 Aug 2018
Wonderful story! You have me hooked. I can not wait for your next installment.
HI , I LOVE THIS FANFIC....BUT PLEASE.... DON'T WAIT SO LONG TO UPDATE ....IT IS FAST BECOMING A FAVORITE OF MINE ....COMPLETELY DIFFERENT PLOT FROM THE USUAL....AND I REALLY LIKE THAT....I HOPE KAGS IS NOT A HUMAN....BUT WHAT COULD SHE BE .....ELEMENTAL PERHAPS....AFTER ALL ELEMENTALS ARE NOT HUMAN OR DEMON...AND THEY ARE IMMORTAL....LONGER LIVED THAN EVEN DEMONS....IMMORTAL ELEMENTALS CAN NOT BE KILLED....THEY ARE LIKE THE CHILDREN OF MOTHER NATURE....USUALLY AS STRONG IF NOT STRONGER THAN DEMONS....DEPENDING ON HOW MANY ELEMENTS THEY HAVE CONTROL OVER....THERE 8 ELEMENTS WHICH ARE ( EARTH) ,(WIND) (,FIRE) ,(WATER/ICE/SNOW) ,(LIGHTNING) ,(NATURE)-(IS POWER OVER ANIMALS I THINK) ,(LIGHT),(DARK)........UPDATE SOON.................................................................................TDAN
Minime (Chapter 12) - Wed 25 Jul 2018
Yey! New chapter! Hope everything will be well for kags n sesh.
Love it. Keep up the good work.
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