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Robin M Sena (Chapter 1) - Fri 14 Sep 2018

Beautiful story and look forward to reading to its completion 


YukinaBlueRose (Chapter 13) - Wed 12 Sep 2018

O! M! ! G! ! ! ! OXD

I LOVE this story! ! ! ! OXD

It! Is! ! AWESOME! ! ! ! OXD

(A couple small things: at the end of the show Sango and Miroku had three children, twin girls and a baby, though I don't remember if it says what gender the baby was. Given the timeline you made, Sango and Miroku could easily be expecting their 4th child, but you have them expecting their 2nd, this makes me VERY sad, because that means you erased one of the twins, and even though the twins only get a VERY short part in the last episode, that part made me absolutely ADORE them. Given that, that makes me super sad.

Now, it hasn't come up yet in the story, but in case it does in the future, I want to point something out ahead of time: Kagome's dominant hand is her right hand. She's right-handed. The proof is how she wields her bow and arrows. She holds the bow with her left and handles the arrows with her right.

There was a couple other little things, but I can't remember them at this moment. Which makes sense, since it is 11:30 at night. PM. Dark out. So, I will most likely make other comments, farther back, when I go through and reread at a letter date.)


shalisa davis (Chapter 13) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

This story is such a breath of fresh air! I read all the chapters in mere hours! I even checked your page for more stories. I haven't read and enjoyed a story like that in a long time! Keep up the good work!


VS (Chapter 13) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

Hello,

this is such a lovely chapter! And I'm so PROUD of little Shippo!!! He has a new tail *squeals* and is taking good care of his mother! He's like "let the grown men waste time with talking I will just do it myself".

And I absolutely adore Kei. I'm a super hard SessKag shipper, but with Kei...let's say that I wouldn't say no to a treesome pairing ;)

I'm looking forward to your next update!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 13) - Sat 08 Sep 2018

Well, it is almost 4 in the morning here, I should be asleep now but I just couldn't stop reading! Wonderful story, I love seeing Shippo and Kagome like this and the interesting relationships they're making. I look forward to more!


S4toonee (Chapter 13) - Sat 08 Sep 2018

I am really enjoying this story.  Looking forward to updates.


Myella (Chapter 13) - Fri 07 Sep 2018

Thank you for the wonderful update. I keep looking for this story to be updated frequently. Looking forward to the next. :)


SmilingFool (Chapter 13) - Fri 07 Sep 2018

My that was a great chapter.   I'm glad Kagome is finally awake maybe now her and Sesshomaru can have an actual talk instead of instincts talk.  Wow what a sly fox we have......  boy oh boy Sesshomaru would have a feild day if he heard what was said.

 

Update soon love this story.


Myella (Chapter 12) - Tue 07 Aug 2018

Wonderful story! You have me hooked. I can not wait for your next installment. 


teresa daniel (Chapter 12) - Thu 26 Jul 2018

 

HI , I LOVE THIS FANFIC....BUT PLEASE.... DON'T WAIT SO LONG TO UPDATE ....IT IS FAST BECOMING A FAVORITE OF MINE ....COMPLETELY DIFFERENT PLOT FROM THE USUAL....AND I REALLY LIKE THAT....I HOPE KAGS IS NOT A HUMAN....BUT WHAT COULD SHE BE .....ELEMENTAL PERHAPS....AFTER ALL ELEMENTALS ARE NOT HUMAN OR DEMON...AND THEY ARE IMMORTAL....LONGER LIVED THAN EVEN DEMONS....IMMORTAL ELEMENTALS CAN NOT BE KILLED....THEY ARE LIKE THE CHILDREN OF MOTHER NATURE....USUALLY AS STRONG IF NOT STRONGER THAN DEMONS....DEPENDING ON HOW MANY ELEMENTS THEY HAVE CONTROL OVER....THERE 8 ELEMENTS WHICH ARE ( EARTH) ,(WIND) (,FIRE) ,(WATER/ICE/SNOW) ,(LIGHTNING) ,(NATURE)-(IS POWER OVER ANIMALS I THINK) ,(LIGHT),(DARK)........UPDATE SOON.................................................................................TDAN


Minime (Chapter 12) - Wed 25 Jul 2018

Yey! New chapter! Hope everything will be well for kags n sesh. 

Love it. Keep up the good work.


Amanda P (Chapter 11) - Sun 15 Jul 2018

I love this story so far. Thank you so much for writing it. 

:)


Jennie (Chapter 11) - Tue 05 Jun 2018

I love this story, and I can't wait for more. I hope that you continue it soon.


Rose (Chapter 10) - Sun 22 Apr 2018

I am so enjoyimg your story. Very creative and well written.  I await in anticipation for the next installment. 

 

 


teresa daniel (Chapter 11) - Wed 11 Apr 2018

HI LOVE YOUR FANFIC .....CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE ITS GOING...LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE ... HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON.....GREAT WRITING SO FAR ....HOPE KAGS ISN'T HUMAN....MAYBE KAMI,OR ELEMENTAL,GODDESS, THE CHILD OF SOME DEITY PLACED WITH THE HIGURASHI FAMILY ,TO HIDE HER, TO PROTECT HER, OR POSSIBLY ADOPTED, MAYBE SHE WAS BORN IN THE PAST AND SENT TO THE FUTURE TO HIDE HER....MAYBE SHE HAS A SEAL, SPELL, OR AN ENCHANTMENT OR SOMETHING SUPPRESSING HER TRUE FORM . 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

Awesome chapter.

Poor Kagome and her fragile heart.  Her sense of duty seems to out weigh her broken heart.

What doesn't kill her will make her strong. 

Excellent writing!!!


trinity3000 (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

Sesshomaru acted like and abusive boyfriend in this chapter.  He hurt her physically and then he was sorry.  He can't even blame his instincts since his beast was not on board with what he did.  I hope she doesn't just wake up and forgive him.  I hate when Kagome acts like a victim.


Natalia (Chapter 11) - Tue 10 Apr 2018

I swear I read it twice! So beautiful and touching. Why oh why am I tourturing my own heart? You surprised me, I did believe she will wake up when he called, but no! Bravo! It's logical that shippo be the one to reach her. Please oh please update soon and don't let my heart hurt for too long wondering!

Thx for updating.

Take care!


Darkness living in Hope (Chapter 11) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

I feel for Kagome, I hope when she wakes up Shipp? can cheer her up and gives Sessh?maru a good talking to when it comes to his mama. 

Pleasse update soon


Sessygurl (Chapter 11) - Mon 09 Apr 2018

Waaaaaa. So sad at the end but it gave room for realizations. I love Sesshoumaru' s demon. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru is thinking as well as showing his instinctual side. I love this story. I cannot wait for more.


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