Your awesome!! 2 chapters in one week I'm so happy I could die, well maybe not die. I wouldnt be able to read your story if did, thank you, thank you! Love that you made kagome a fighter! Can't wait to see what's in store for them =)
Wow...all I wanted to say was 'go Kagome go' like a cheerleade. She did her best but slowly she will have to submit. I hope she can get a few more licks at Sessho.
I love Sessho (sometimes when he's not being a meanie) but a demon got to do what a demon got to do. Kagome will more than likely become the next Lady of the Western Lands and a mother to Sess' first heir and I hope it's a male...full blood with immunity to holy power and he should be able to control it and use it...that would be so cool. Maybe he can be a mini Sessho or maybe they can have twin mini Sessos. He will be so proud but does he have to spoil it by raping his future mate and mother to his pups?
The chase scene was amazing and a little bit hilarious. Poor Kagome...never can catch a break. LOL
Looking forward to future updates when RL allows it.
Cheers to another great job done!!!
Lorena (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Nov 2017
Hell yeah! I love Sesshomaru, most of the time, but this assertiveness/confidence is practically flirting and I find him adorable for it! I'm curious how you will have their offspring, though. Will they be half demon half spiritual, or full blooded with holy immunities or some new twist?
Oh wow who knew sesshomaru was such a pervert. Admiring her butt like that! I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next!
Great story so far. I am glad that Kagome is going to not just give in to Sesshomaru's proclamation. I look forward to reading about the chase and subsequent aftermath should he catch her. (Though we know he will based upon the summary for this story.) I also hope that Kagome's spirit isn't easily broken nor that she just gives in to the mating. I am eagerly anticipating more chapters; please update soon!
This was a nice update. It was well written and you did great without a beta. No spelling or grammatical errors that I could see...Awesome!!!
This was actually a humerous chapter. At least she did try what I was thinking about in my chapter two review, but it did'nt work. LOL :)
Kagome seems to be using her smarts in evading and consealment. Good for her. She is going to give Sess a run for his money and she is not going to go down without a fight.
Love this story so far. Looking forward to future updates. Excellent job!!!
Cheers!
maria (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Nov 2017
Mooorree I love a good cat n mouse fic
It is really food so far! I wonder what will happen next
Toni (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Nov 2017
like this looking forward to more chapters
Koi (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Nov 2017
This is such a great start! I can't wait until your next update!!
Nooo, I'm dying can't wait for the next chapter, oh kagome is in for it now
Ooooooooh shoot, this is hella interesting. You would think Kags would get somebody to teach her demon culture if she's gonna be staying in the past but no, rarely does that happen.
ja me till next time
Wow. A nice beginning to what seems like it's going to be an interesting story.
There are a few spelling/grammatical errors but it did not detract from the flow of the story.
As I was reading I wondered why Kagome just didn't jump into the well instead of just standing there trying to figure out what unnerved her. Reading a little further, you did explain why she did what she did. I'm glad you explained because if you hadn't I would have said, "what the hell, is she stupid or what?" LOL
Anyway, looking forward to future updates and keep up the good Job!
Thanks for a new story to read and welcome :)
Minime (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Nov 2017
I cant wait for the next chapter.
maria (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Nov 2017
I normally don't read fics if they only have one chapter but thisssss keep going I'm hooked already
Holy smokes! I'm so curious of what's to come. Great opening it catches you even in the first sentence hope you update soon fav =D
Ooohhhh....whats gonna happen!! Next chapter please!
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