Revised chapter was better but need a chapter. Please!
I dug it! You made my holiday! Even if it wasn't a full update I'm grateful, seemed cleaner and well written. There was a few words misspelled but I think that's just the auto correct, can't wait for the next chapter!! (^_-)
Looking forward to reading more. Update soon.
OMG! I LOVED IT!! I can't wait for another chapter!!
Please add more I am loving this can not wait for the fall out
Very good story. I like how she's fighting against him and also how kagome has realized her powers but hasn't turned into this all powerful being. Why did the well close? Where were the tachi, because someone must have heard or felt something? Where's sesshomaru taking kagome now?
She healed him but did he get his arm back too or just heal the burns?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
ponpiri (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Nov 2017
The story so far reads a bit rushed. I like that you have so many chapters within a short span of time, but wouldn't mind waiting a bit longer if that means the errors will be fixed. There are free spell checkers online if you don't have access to a word processor to check your work.
Moooorrrreeeeee pppplleeeaasssseee
Deana (Chapter 4) - Wed 15 Nov 2017
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter
What a chase. Sesshomaru is persistent. Kagome did right by not purifying him.
I am really loving this story so far ! thanks for the up keep of updating.
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