Reviews for Caniche by Elvis

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Nilee1 (Chapter 11) - Thu 01 Mar 2018

Each chapter leaves a tableau. I can see, hear and feel each picture, and you are an expert at capturing tone.

Kitt :-)


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

Oh boy! I really need more of this! Looking forward to more. Thanks so much!


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

Melting here...


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

Oh TOO FUNNY!


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

I really love the feeling these stories evoke. Thanks!


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

LOL! Well that too... cute!


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Feb 2018

Oh I love how this is written. Sweet, sad and charming. 


Nilee1 (Chapter 4) - Mon 26 Feb 2018

Okay, so I was re-reading chapter 4. The green and red references are throwing me. Is the green symbolic of his poison or maybe Bakusaiga? Is it from the final battle? 

Still loving your story so complex in its simplicity.


Nilee1 (Chapter 9) - Sun 25 Feb 2018

I just reread "Basie" again--beautifully poetic.


Nilee1 (Chapter 9) - Thu 22 Feb 2018

Yup-I truly love this story. 


Neelixonee (Chapter 7) - Thu 22 Feb 2018

Haha such a good description of him!


Nilee1 (Chapter 8) - Wed 21 Feb 2018

Hmm


Neelixonee (Chapter 8) - Wed 21 Feb 2018

Warms my heart!


Sara (Chapter 8) - Tue 20 Feb 2018

Favorite! I love the imagery. It's like drinking a cup of coffee. Little warm sips. :)


Neelixonee (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Haha such a good description of him!


Nilee1 (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

Okay, I get it. It's easier to understand when you use quotation marks for actual speech.


Nilee1 (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

I'm confused; is he reading her thoughts?

 


ponpiri (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Nov 2017

Interesting. A bit confusing, so I'm looking forward to some dialog. 


Eryn (Chapter 5) - Wed 22 Nov 2017

I love this!  I like that you pace yourself and don't push too much too soon.


Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Nov 2017

This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. There is poetry in your writing.


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