Very nicely done! I look forward to seeing how you continue this story! I hope poor little Kagome gets to have a happy life soon enough. That's too bad about Kat. Her mom needs to be eviscerated for her stupidity and crimes.
besides the sentence structures that could use some work, this story isn’t half bad. i love that you made kagome blind but with the ability to see people’s auras. it’s not an angle everyone has gone to. then again, if everyone used that it would get quite dull, so thank you sharing yer idea with us. i hope you update soon with a next chapter. would love to see how kagome develops and finally we can get an intro to sess. x3
Lorena (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Nov 2017
The tears! I'm so sad that this happened, I wonder what will happen to Kagome?
Loveyaa (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Nov 2017
Well that escalated quickly. All of a sudden they decide to come mess with them and all of a sudden Kat is dead. I am interested to see where the story goes, but a few parts do get a little confusing. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Poor Kagome, that line about her world being dark now got me right in the feels. Why did mama have to die T_T anywho I'm glad she was avenged but Uncle is only so old. What will happen to them now?
Ja ja till next time and keep up the great work
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Nov 2017
Ok, this is my new favorit story, but please please pleaseeee!!! Don't leave it INCOMPLETE!!!!!! Hope you update soon.
Great job so far can't wait to see what happens next!
This chapter was so sad! Poor little Kagome. At least she still has Harold. Hopefully things look up for her soon!
Wow....i really like your plot...it's a great isea that Kagome is able to see spiritual beings...its really sad that she has to witness so mucj cruelty at such a young age...i'm really mad at Tess...she is a real monster and i' m glad that Kagome is able to clearly regognize this in her aura...she won't get fooled by miko garbs and status of a person...she will judge anyone but by their character and aura...can't wait for her to meet this super brigjt shining star ;D
Marie (Chapter 2) - Tue 07 Nov 2017
Love it, well written. Cant wait for an update
Lorena (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Nov 2017
Very interesting...I wonder how she knows of her uncle if she can't see him, or why at the very least it doesn't freak her out?
Toni (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Nov 2017
You are an amazing writer! I wish that I had ur talent. Could you plz also update 'Stranded in the Rain'
I L<3 <3 <3 V E D YOUR STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Update soon!!!!?
Thnxs :'( .
This story is absolutely amazing so far. Incredibly creative and original. I can’t wait for more!
This is beautiful and tragic and sweet all at once! I look forwards to more!
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