Hehehehehehe!! XDDD
meikiana (Chapter 15) - Thu 28 Aug 2008
Awww. You ARE loved so don't cry. I really love where this story is going and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Wonderful job! :)
I am enjoying the story so far (on chapter 5 right now) but it's really clear that you've rewritten Grease with Kagome as Sandy and Sesshoumaru as Danny with small variations. I feel like maybe you should mention that you've taken inspiration from it at the very least. I'm not meaning to flame or anything, but I guess I was a bit disappointed that you didn't even mention it and it was so obvious.
Nevermind, I am a dumbass. I just saw your author note in the first chapter. You can fire me from life now! I'm still reading it and really enjoying it though! I like the direction you've taken with Toran. Sesshoumaru is devious indeed!
Ok, here's one more review, JUST FOR YOU!! I have NO clue why people aren't reviewing this story more. Yes, it's a slightly off-beat premise, one that might make some uncomfortable (y'know, the whole older man thing), but it's still intriguing and well-written. In fact, your writing has grown by leaps and bounds since I first started reading it. *I* think you're doing good, kiddo... keep it up!!!!!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
I had just started reading your story for the first time today and I have to say that I'm glad that I did. It's really good and of all the student/teacher ideas and Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairings, this has to be the greatest ones I've read. You do a really good job! Congradulations! ^__^ -KB
:) Good old fashioned "hot for teacher", eh? LOL Such a good cliffe, too! I can't help but wonder if it's a good thing or a bad thing that the team is in on all this. LOL.. we shall see!
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daapatemysoul (Chapter 5) - Thu 08 May 2008
I have been enjoying your story. I've read some of your other work and it always turns out decent (some of it down right rocks). There's something about the writing style on this fic though that leaves me feeling kinda empty. Don't get me wrong- good fic. Just.. it seems to lack your usual flair for style. Oh well, some fics just never want to cooperate as well as others.
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