Ha I get a spidery feeling some documents were misplaced? Or her application or CV went to the stack? Curious how they will meet again!
Very nice update and as expected, perfectly written.
I was pleasantly surprised that Sessho did not get grumpy with Kagome for bumping into him and knocking his important folder out of his hand scattering the documents every which way. I liked when he looked at her eyes he seemed a bit taken aback for a moment. I bet those eyes will be on his mind for a little while. Lol :)
As a knowlegeable business man, why would he be carrying a folder (probably manilla) of important documents under his arm instead of in a brief case? A professional faux pas perhaps! Lol :)
Oh, I just can't wait for more updates and especially the inevitable online meeting. Thank you for your updates.
Chance meeting on the train...and he got hooked by those huge baby blues! Sweet!! Very nice update! Thanks for posting this charming new chapter Cheers!
ponpiri (Chapter 3) - Mon 25 Sep 2017
We know who she bumped into. Will he find her on the app? And her burying her phone at the bottom of her bookbag is soooo relatable. When I signed up for Tinder, I was so paranoid about seeing people I know that I deleted it after just 3 days.
small critique: death to romaji! It's your story, so don't take it as a directive, but I just don't understand using Japanese when there are translations for what you want to say.
Natalia (Chapter 3) - Mon 25 Sep 2017
So the tipycal hn!
I bet I know who that is!
Wonder if he has an application himself? And will be recognise her?
Thanks for the update!
LOL...she always makes such a wonderful first impression on him! Thanks for updating. Looking forward to more. Cheers!
I just read chapters 2 and 3. I loved both of them. I know I am going to fall in love with this story because I'm already there. So Sessho is possibly going to be or will be joining the compatibility community. Can't wait to see how it plays out.
Thanks for the updates. You are a wonderful writer...keep up the good writing and Iwill be looking forward to more chapters soon.
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