Reviews for Sengoku Love Story by Chie

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Nicole (Chapter 3) - Mon 28 May 2018

Ahhh, now that Life After Loss is finished, I'm going into Chie-withdrawl. Fortunately, I need to catch back up with this story. :)

I'm curious as to why Sesshomaru's parents would need a warning about a miko being about for the night - or why they might have a strange reaction to her presence. Would that have been a common reaction at the time? Or is there some other reason for it?

One potential fix: "She stirred a little, when get got off the saddle, but did not wake."

get got - should "get" be a different word? "he" perhaps?


alice (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 May 2018

Wonderful! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 May 2018

Love mom! Already scheming for more grand babies. Wonderful chapter. Thank you so much for a lovely read. 


Natalia (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 May 2018

What a perfect match for the name of the chapter. The lady mother indeed is planting seeds. I wonder how well will they grow?

Thx for updating. Lovely story. I can't wait to find the whole story behind Kagome's education and lige.

Eagerly waiting for More!


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 May 2018

Hmm..... Indeed the Miko kagome seems peculiar in this story sure it will be very  interesting  to find out what she truly was, you got me curious. And also it seems  to me that Sesshoumaru's mother was acting somewhat  like a " fairy GodMother ". Hmm... mother what are you trying to plant?  
I wonder who's Sesshomaru's wife  and is she still alive? 
Thank you  for a wonderful  updated,  very interesting  story!


VS (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 May 2018

Hello,

well well well our Lady mother is plotting *evil grin* she will let Kagome start as a teacher for Rin, slowly she will introduce her to the responsibilities of a Lady of this house and will most likely find some excuses to let Sesshoumaru and Kagome spent time...much time together. She will praise Sesshoumaru, when Kagome and her are alone, and she will praise Kagome, when Sesshoumaru and her are alone!!! I see it coming ;D

It was a really nice chapter and I'm curious to see, how Kagome will react to the offer. I hope you will reveal some things about her past!

 

I look forward to your next update!

 

 


Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 May 2018

Can’t wait to read more!!! Thanks for the update!!! ;) Kagome’s not getting away that easily it seems . 


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 4) - Fri 27 Apr 2018

Oh noh kagome! I think this chapter was short. Is that lady mother there? Hahaha!!! I was hoping for kagome to see sesshomaru again. Thanks for the update! This new story is really interesting!


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

The, I’m educated misstep! Love it! One would think that Miko, though women, would be better educated than the norm. Looking forward to the next update! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Like a lot of the other reviewers, I wasn’t sure I would like an all human cast but I am loving this. I love the images you draw of the fortress. Great chapter. Thanks! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

A bit more chatty than normal but Sessh through and through. Very nice chapter. Thank you!


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Apr 2018

Very nice. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. 


The-infamous-one (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Great chapter!   I hope sesshoumaru mother isn't insulted. 


LadyNita (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Did not think I was gonna like this story

 

Then 

 

BOOM

 

here I am waiting for another update!!!

Fantastic work


VS (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Hello,

what can I say? You did an excellent job as always! I really like how you build this mystic aura about Kagome and her background story! Why does she have to travel for 2 years? Why does Kagome interpret the poem this way?

I'm really excited to see where you will go with this story! I also look forward to the confrontation between Kagome and Sesshoumaru when he sees it fit, to ask about the way she earns her money ;)


Natalia (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

I love the details you provide. I love historical fiction.

Kagome's misstep isn't something as bad. Hehe I bet the lady had caught her blunder..

Thx for updating. Was wondering if you would update this since I was missing it.

Take care!


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Oops guess she wasn’t supposed to tell anyone she was educated lol. I bet she’ll stay to teach Rin. Can’t wait to read more!!;) 


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 3) - Fri 12 Jan 2018

I have read this first at Tumblr, after reading the 3, i decided to click the link below and lead me here, this story had piqued my interest, although they're all human in this story which is fine with me! However you  have mentioned in here in this story that sesshomaru has golden eyes and thus i wonder if his hair was silver white? I'm sorry hehehe I'm just confused...well overall i believe this new story of yours would be amazing just like your other stories that i have read already, from summary and plot i knew it!

You're a genius! I'll stay tuned for the update! Thanks! 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 3) - Thu 11 Jan 2018

Interesting story so far! I can't wait to read more!


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

I can’t wait to read more!!! I’m curious to see how this plays out!!!


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