Reviews for Sengoku Love Story by Chie

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TamashaToko (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

Like Kagome is a miko so why is Sesshoumaru surprised she had other things to do?  She was also right about her maybe not being qualified.  She doesn't have a degree.  Not even an associates.  She could have wandered back to her shrine doing missions on the way there to ask herself and then return so she can have her play date with Rin, but no that would be a compromise and we can't just do that can we?  Takes two chapters for Sesshoumaru to ask Kagome and then a whole one for her to state the reasons why not.  Why can't people just say things directly.  This is Sengoku Downton Abbey !!!! There is going to be that chapter where Kagome is keeping a dark secret so she rejects Sesshoumaru's marriage proposal and then a diease literally has to murder his fiancee later for them to get back together.  No one read my reviews they contain spoilers for where this fic is going.

 

Also what is Sesshoumaru's hair color?

 

Good fic.


TamashaToko (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

You now took a whole chapter for Sesshoumaru with undetermined hair color to ask Kagome a question.  So glad it takes you a month to write these Chie.  Is it because you're attending Hogwarts where you have to write with a quill instead of a pen?  Like I get why they can't be using laptops up in Hogwarts (you know there has to be that one teacher though that wishes they could cause some students have awful hand writing) but I don't get why they couldn't use regular plastic BIC fountain pens.  I'd ask Sesshoumaru but that might take four chapters.

 

JK of course like I said you have the power to put a lot of detail in small sentences and paragraphs with the words you choose so ur doing a fine job.  Who is the character at the bottom of the screen who's name I have to type?  He isn't in this story.  Unfair.  Is it cause last time you used him you killed him?


TamashaToko (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

oooooo chapter 6.  What happened after that cliff hanger where Inukimi (I'm not even going to pretend to know how to write what you were calling her it's Inukimi with non-disclosed hair color) was going to begin meddling?  I'll tell you what happened in this chapter.  Sesshoumaru walked across a bridge and told someone to raise their head.  Now I only have like two chapters left.  Thanks yo.

 

Rin cute do'h.

 

Kagome is totally a hime from an enemy clan that ran away though right?  I'm fine with it as long as there is no arranged marriages of any sorts going down.  


TamashaToko (Chapter 2) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

ummmm eye color on point but hair color not mentioned.  You have left me the reader forced to imagine what he looks like.  1/10.  This is like when I thought Hermonie's name was pronounced Hermeney until the movies came out, but I'm still reading.  I like how your sentences are short and sweet and get the point across.


TamashaToko (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

The Clan of Medieval Arranged Marriage Story would like to declare war on Sengoku Love Story.  If Sesshoumaru does not at least have white hair I'll be quite displeased.  I don't even know how I will manage to live my life for the rest of the day.  What happened to Rin's shoes?  I'll keep reading.


Deb (Chapter 7) - Fri 24 Aug 2018

I am most tickled by this story~! I wonder how we've been in the same Fandom for so long but I'm only just realizing your amazing writing skills? I do remember following chain of love for a while but I think life happened and I fell away for a bit. Regardless, I have found you once more and I will dedicatedly stalk all of your writings as they're very wonderful. I won't always get around to a review but I'll appreciate all of them. Take heart in knowing you have another true fan. <3 keep up the good work! 


Koree (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Aug 2018

Oooooooo great chap


S4toonee (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2018

I love what I have read so far.  I like the alternate setting.  Look forward to more updates.


CookieAsylum (Chapter 7) - Tue 14 Aug 2018

Oh no! Sess!Mom is concocting plans, and Sesshoumaru is on the fence whether to go along with them! And poor Kagome is caught in the middle. She's got that "caged bird" look going.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic, Chie! Definitely looking forward to the next installment!


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Aug 2018

Lovely update. Thanks so much 


Natalia (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Aug 2018

Oho someone is already smitten ! 

And I adore Lady mother  her idea, which I believe I know what is, is amazing  

Thx for updating  


Koree (Chapter 6) - Wed 01 Aug 2018

Good story 


Natalia (Chapter 6) - Tue 12 Jun 2018

Sesshomaru's new image as a war Lord shogun and human nobility is something that I never thought would catch my attention, but you did the impossible. In the anime he is more er apathetic? Ignoring the passing of time but here his presence is commanding and more intense. All action and testosterone in a way... Uhhh I so love it already.

Thx for updating. Glad to see Rin his real daughter and not adopted.

Keep posting and spoiling us. 

Cheers! 


Lorena (Chapter 6) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

Snap~ I'm loving all this "catching Kagome off gaurd" business going on this chapter,  I get a kick out her honest reactions and it'll maybe get everyone closer to their goals. I wonder what Sesshomaru will do, was he always in the gardens or did he see them and follow? 


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 6) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

I felt my heart stop beating when their eyes met again,does something had spark?  I have been waiting for this moment for them to meet again. 


Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Aww man. I wanted it to continue. Lovely story. Thanks for the update.


VS (Chapter 6) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Hello,

it happened...Kagome faltered in her decision to leave the clan as soon as possible because of little Rin. The girl is just adorable no one can resist her - and that's sure a power of its own ^^

Even though Sesshoumaru is human he has still the ability to move undetected and be somehow everywhere seeing everything ... it' somewhat creepy :D Kagome has to watch out now...mother and son are rather observant!!!

I don't remember if you had mentioned something about Kaede in the chapters before? Is she a priestess too? So maybe she knows something about Kagome and her secret? That would be interesting ^^

Nice chapter!!! Let's see what Sesshoumaru has to say!

I look forward to your next update!


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Sat 09 Jun 2018

Nicechapter. I’ve been reading one of your earlier stories, Tables Turned. You have really come a long way with your story telling gifts. While that story is good, there were a lot of errors. This is put together very nicely and you get your point across without a lot of extra embellishments. Thanks for updating, this is one of my current favorites. 


Nicole (Chapter 5) - Mon 28 May 2018

Ha! I had a feeling that's where the Lady might be headed. The last couple of chapters also make me dreadfully curious as to Kagome's own backgroud - since it is becoming more obvious that she is not a typical miko...

I look forward to your next update!


Nicole (Chapter 4) - Mon 28 May 2018

Ah ah ah! Kagome has revealed herself to be exceptionally literate for the time! What will the Lady conclude? :D


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