ummmm eye color on point but hair color not mentioned.  You have left me the reader forced to imagine what he looks like.  1/10.  This is like when I thought Hermonie's name was pronounced Hermeney until the movies came out, but I'm still reading.  I like how your sentences are short and sweet and get the point across.

The Clan of Medieval Arranged Marriage Story would like to declare war on Sengoku Love Story.  If Sesshoumaru does not at least have white hair I'll be quite displeased.  I don't even know how I will manage to live my life for the rest of the day.  What happened to Rin's shoes?  I'll keep reading.

I am most tickled by this story~! I wonder how we've been in the same Fandom for so long but I'm only just realizing your amazing writing skills? I do remember following chain of love for a while but I think life happened and I fell away for a bit. Regardless, I have found you once more and I will dedicatedly stalk all of your writings as they're very wonderful. I won't always get around to a review but I'll appreciate all of them. Take heart in knowing you have another true fan. <3 keep up the good work! 

Oooooooo great chap

I love what I have read so far.  I like the alternate setting.  Look forward to more updates.

Oh no! Sess!Mom is concocting plans, and Sesshoumaru is on the fence whether to go along with them! And poor Kagome is caught in the middle. She's got that "caged bird" look going.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic, Chie! Definitely looking forward to the next installment!

Lovely update. Thanks so much 

Oho someone is already smitten ! 

And I adore Lady mother  her idea, which I believe I know what is, is amazing  

Thx for updating  

Good story 

Sesshomaru's new image as a war Lord shogun and human nobility is something that I never thought would catch my attention, but you did the impossible. In the anime he is more er apathetic? Ignoring the passing of time but here his presence is commanding and more intense. All action and testosterone in a way... Uhhh I so love it already.

Thx for updating. Glad to see Rin his real daughter and not adopted.

Keep posting and spoiling us. 

Cheers! 

Snap~ I'm loving all this "catching Kagome off gaurd" business going on this chapter,  I get a kick out her honest reactions and it'll maybe get everyone closer to their goals. I wonder what Sesshomaru will do, was he always in the gardens or did he see them and follow? 

I felt my heart stop beating when their eyes met again,does something had spark?  I have been waiting for this moment for them to meet again. 

Aww man. I wanted it to continue. Lovely story. Thanks for the update.

Hello,

it happened...Kagome faltered in her decision to leave the clan as soon as possible because of little Rin. The girl is just adorable no one can resist her - and that's sure a power of its own ^^

Even though Sesshoumaru is human he has still the ability to move undetected and be somehow everywhere seeing everything ... it' somewhat creepy :D Kagome has to watch out now...mother and son are rather observant!!!

I don't remember if you had mentioned something about Kaede in the chapters before? Is she a priestess too? So maybe she knows something about Kagome and her secret? That would be interesting ^^

Nice chapter!!! Let's see what Sesshoumaru has to say!

I look forward to your next update!

Nicechapter. I’ve been reading one of your earlier stories, Tables Turned. You have really come a long way with your story telling gifts. While that story is good, there were a lot of errors. This is put together very nicely and you get your point across without a lot of extra embellishments. Thanks for updating, this is one of my current favorites. 

Ha! I had a feeling that's where the Lady might be headed. The last couple of chapters also make me dreadfully curious as to Kagome's own backgroud - since it is becoming more obvious that she is not a typical miko...

I look forward to your next update!

Ah ah ah! Kagome has revealed herself to be exceptionally literate for the time! What will the Lady conclude? :D

Ahhh, now that Life After Loss is finished, I'm going into Chie-withdrawl. Fortunately, I need to catch back up with this story. :)

I'm curious as to why Sesshomaru's parents would need a warning about a miko being about for the night - or why they might have a strange reaction to her presence. Would that have been a common reaction at the time? Or is there some other reason for it?

One potential fix: "She stirred a little, when get got off the saddle, but did not wake."

get got - should "get" be a different word? "he" perhaps?

Wonderful! 

Love mom! Already scheming for more grand babies. Wonderful chapter. Thank you so much for a lovely read.