Reviews for Sengoku Love Story by Chie

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hana sora (Chapter 8) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

i think kagome must think it twice before agreed with sesshomaru's offer . . but keep it coming


Ankita (Chapter 8) - Sun 16 Sep 2018

T_T I KNEW I'D REGRET READING AN INCOMPLETE FIC T_T BUT STILL I READ IT AND NOW I'M DYING TO WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXTTTT.... WHAT TO DOOOOOO OH GOD T_T

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNNNNNNNN... & THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT I'M GLAD YOU DIDN'T LEAVE IT AS A DRABBLE THIS PLOT IS WORTH WRITING ABOUT <3 <3


KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Thu 13 Sep 2018

Tense moment  and a bit of relief...maybe. Not a huge confession but I wonder if there is more. Very nice update. Thank you! 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 8) - Wed 12 Sep 2018

Well, that was intense and highly enjoyable!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

Great story, please update the next chapter quickly!


Faith (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

I feel like the amount of uneasiness Kagome feels is out of proportion to Sesshoumaru's and his mother's behaviour. I don't think her mandate from the shrine is the main obstacle here. Does she have past, negative experience with noble persons? Perhaps that is where Naraku will come into the story? I'm definitely going to be on edge till the central conflict reveals itself!

 

Anyway, thanks for continuing to update, this story has so much potential and your writing is excellent!


Orotami (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

I was so happy to see an update! Beautiful as always and I'm excited for the next chapter!


VS (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

Hello,

I love that you kind of switched perspectives in the last two chapters. That way we are always up to date about the feelings and thoughts of Kagome and Sesshoumaru!

Your characterization of Sesshoumaru is as always true to the point. You did an especially amazing job in chapter 8. Sesshoumaru was just sooo Sesshoumaru :)

I get with every chapter even more interested in Kagomes' past. I hope you will reveal a few of her secrets in the next chapters. Maybe you will show us even the letter Kagome will write to the shrine? But then again, she surely will be afraid that Lady Nishikawa is going to read it? Gosh, poor Kagome! :) Let's see hiw she is going to survive there!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


TamashaToko (Chapter 8) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

Like Kagome is a miko so why is Sesshoumaru surprised she had other things to do?  She was also right about her maybe not being qualified.  She doesn't have a degree.  Not even an associates.  She could have wandered back to her shrine doing missions on the way there to ask herself and then return so she can have her play date with Rin, but no that would be a compromise and we can't just do that can we?  Takes two chapters for Sesshoumaru to ask Kagome and then a whole one for her to state the reasons why not.  Why can't people just say things directly.  This is Sengoku Downton Abbey !!!! There is going to be that chapter where Kagome is keeping a dark secret so she rejects Sesshoumaru's marriage proposal and then a diease literally has to murder his fiancee later for them to get back together.  No one read my reviews they contain spoilers for where this fic is going.

 

Also what is Sesshoumaru's hair color?

 

Good fic.


TamashaToko (Chapter 7) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

You now took a whole chapter for Sesshoumaru with undetermined hair color to ask Kagome a question.  So glad it takes you a month to write these Chie.  Is it because you're attending Hogwarts where you have to write with a quill instead of a pen?  Like I get why they can't be using laptops up in Hogwarts (you know there has to be that one teacher though that wishes they could cause some students have awful hand writing) but I don't get why they couldn't use regular plastic BIC fountain pens.  I'd ask Sesshoumaru but that might take four chapters.

 

JK of course like I said you have the power to put a lot of detail in small sentences and paragraphs with the words you choose so ur doing a fine job.  Who is the character at the bottom of the screen who's name I have to type?  He isn't in this story.  Unfair.  Is it cause last time you used him you killed him?


TamashaToko (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

oooooo chapter 6.  What happened after that cliff hanger where Inukimi (I'm not even going to pretend to know how to write what you were calling her it's Inukimi with non-disclosed hair color) was going to begin meddling?  I'll tell you what happened in this chapter.  Sesshoumaru walked across a bridge and told someone to raise their head.  Now I only have like two chapters left.  Thanks yo.

 

Rin cute do'h.

 

Kagome is totally a hime from an enemy clan that ran away though right?  I'm fine with it as long as there is no arranged marriages of any sorts going down.  


TamashaToko (Chapter 2) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

ummmm eye color on point but hair color not mentioned.  You have left me the reader forced to imagine what he looks like.  1/10.  This is like when I thought Hermonie's name was pronounced Hermeney until the movies came out, but I'm still reading.  I like how your sentences are short and sweet and get the point across.


TamashaToko (Chapter 1) - Mon 10 Sep 2018

The Clan of Medieval Arranged Marriage Story would like to declare war on Sengoku Love Story.  If Sesshoumaru does not at least have white hair I'll be quite displeased.  I don't even know how I will manage to live my life for the rest of the day.  What happened to Rin's shoes?  I'll keep reading.


Deb (Chapter 7) - Fri 24 Aug 2018

I am most tickled by this story~! I wonder how we've been in the same Fandom for so long but I'm only just realizing your amazing writing skills? I do remember following chain of love for a while but I think life happened and I fell away for a bit. Regardless, I have found you once more and I will dedicatedly stalk all of your writings as they're very wonderful. I won't always get around to a review but I'll appreciate all of them. Take heart in knowing you have another true fan. <3 keep up the good work! 


Koree (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Aug 2018

Oooooooo great chap


S4toonee (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2018

I love what I have read so far.  I like the alternate setting.  Look forward to more updates.


CookieAsylum (Chapter 7) - Tue 14 Aug 2018

Oh no! Sess!Mom is concocting plans, and Sesshoumaru is on the fence whether to go along with them! And poor Kagome is caught in the middle. She's got that "caged bird" look going.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic, Chie! Definitely looking forward to the next installment!


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Aug 2018

Lovely update. Thanks so much 


Natalia (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Aug 2018

Oho someone is already smitten ! 

And I adore Lady mother  her idea, which I believe I know what is, is amazing  

Thx for updating  


Koree (Chapter 6) - Wed 01 Aug 2018

Good story 


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