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Lorena (Chapter 10) - Mon 17 Sep 2018

Boy am I late... I've been too reliant on alerts that I haven't cruised for new stories... I regret this now because I could've been spazzin over this from the very beginning! I love how natural everyone seems to me, so it makes sense that Kagome will fight Sesshomaru on a quick marriage and other things im sure .I can't wait to read what's next


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sun 09 Sep 2018

Well that was steamy! Think she’s going to say Yes! LOL. Great update!


Lea (Chapter 10) - Sun 09 Sep 2018

yesss 'gome getcho man!


Kimmy (Chapter 10) - Fri 07 Sep 2018

Interesting turn can’t wait for a update to see where this is going.


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 10) - Fri 07 Sep 2018

That lemon dinner was so tasty. Thank you, your cooking was wonderful!

 

Now I did see some grammar mistakes. Mostly it being a him/he when it should have been a her/she. The length was perfect. Not to short, but not to long. Just enough details to keep the pace. I have noticed with some stories with lemons that they use too much filler to make the scene longer. But yours is perfect. The end was super cute as well. It feels like she said yes to marring him without really saying it.

Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what you write next.


candace peaches (Chapter 10) - Fri 07 Sep 2018

WOW!~no other words needed. c'ya'


Kimmy (Chapter 9) - Mon 03 Sep 2018

Amazing I love this story. Please update soon I feel like their will be drama with the relat coming.


marisel (Chapter 9) - Fri 31 Aug 2018

It is supper good. Are they all humans in b this story L.  Don't stop writing  the plot is good.  I be waiting for more 


SammyJams (Chapter 9) - Fri 31 Aug 2018

Awesome update!


Shayla (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Wow grabbing involved huh? Can't wait for her to meet the others. I feel like it's gonna be funny.


Toni (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

this story keeps getting better and better  can't wait for more


Anna Grey (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

one of the best story I've ever read!! Love your writing so muchhhhh

I check your updates every single day, EVERY SINGLE DAY I repeat. 

Love your NEET neighbor too, hilarious, brilliant

Can't wait to read more of your awesome story, love you!!

 


Orotami (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Sword play first thing in the morning... be still my heart! Can't wait for the next chapter


candace peaches (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

i beg of you, PLEASE let this have a lot of chapters. unless is a drabble of 100 words a chapter. i think this is going to turn out to be another one of your great stories. i like reading your work b/c you have a way of bringing your readers into the plot and making them think they are apart of it too. that's why you're on my faves list here and ff.net. keep up the great writing and c'ya'


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Most excellent update! Love that tattoo on his back. I like Inuyasha in this story too. Welcome to the family Kagome. Cheers!


Peach (Chapter 9) - Wed 29 Aug 2018

Really liking the story so far. Looking forward to the next update!


Lea (Chapter 9) - Wed 29 Aug 2018

SO GLAD you decided to extend this one-shot cause i would've died trying to figure out what happened between these two! 


Cheyanna (Chapter 9) - Wed 29 Aug 2018

That tattoo sounds like an incredible work of art! I can just imagine it. Thanks for the update and I can’t wait to read more!!!;)


Sessygurl (Chapter 9) - Wed 29 Aug 2018

Love this much. I like that the noise was home in the dojo shirtless...swoons. Inuyasha brash as always too.I cannot wait for the next chapter

 


Skylar (Chapter 9) - Wed 29 Aug 2018

Loving this new story!


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