Fantastic chapter. You had 7 more updates since I last read this story so I had to start over and read from the beginning again. As I got to where the new updates began from where I orginally left off at chap. 7 I began to understand the story much better. Thanks for the little changes you made, like the small glossary of some of the words and the little summaries at the end of each chapter. I can see where you are taking this story, well at least I am beggining to see where it is going to a point.

So the human nobles are feeding off of Sesshomaru to sustain their life. This makes me wonder why they would need Kagura. I think they might be planning to use her to mate with Sesshomara so they can have pups to continue to feed off their life force to continue to sustaining their own existance because they realize that Sessho is weakening and they need new blood or they could be wanting Kagura as a substitue for him. Well anyway, this is my theory. I am probably way out in left field. Lol  :)

It is so different from anything concerning an alternate universe that I have read thus far. You kept all the key characters from the anime playing in different roles. That was interesting. I am looking forward to the future updates you will post. Great writting and great story.

Awesome chapter, thanks for the update!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come! 

I love the story,it’s riveting.

CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

Well I guess if I read the author's notes I'd have seen your definitions and things! LMBO! Disregard!

First let me say that this is a really great story from what I've read so far! Very interesting concept and a great 'page turner' (mouse scroller?) I just find myself confused about who's talking (specifically when I see the itallics), what's going on and what certain things mean. I suppose I'm not very familiar with some of the Hebrew words used in the context they're used, and the beings you describe... I'm imagining this is like a fantasy video game universe mixed with some Judaism and your imagination? I'm trying to follow but I find myself re-reading certain paragraphs after moving forward and goinig, "wait what?" lol I think I understand what you're doing with the foreshadowing and what not... so I suppose I should just hold my horses and finish reading what you have and wait for your future updates to serve as explainations...

A glossary of fonts, punctuations and terms at the end or beginning of a chapter would be extremely helpful and allow me to follow much better. I really like the summaries you've done. That has helped clear up a few things for me as well. (My reading comprehension is lacking at 1AM when I'm half sleep but can't stop reading lol! You know how you doze off infront of your laptop... wake back up... fight the sleep... ? No? Just me? Okay lol)

Okay... Happy Humpday!

Great story!

I'm impressed. I don't usually admit to being. You have created an amazing story that is different from what I typically see. Can't wait for you to update!

I find this story very intriguing and interesting. It is very, very confusing. I read your author's notes and I am trying very hard to make some sense out of it. I know you said things will fall into place later but a little background history on Kagome and Sesshomaru would be nice also a little meaning to some of the words used would be nice too.

Other than that the story is nicely written and I will continue to read to get a better understanding. Looking forward to updates on this unsual tale.

Very very interesting....

This story is intriguing but confusing.