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Annie (Chapter 11) - Wed 30 Oct 2019

Welcome back. I missed your story.   It's good that Inuyasha had finally reflected on him and Kagome after the years she was away, but he will always remain selfish and immature.  I'm liking this strong and confident Kagome.  She handled herself quite nicely with the council.  I have no clue why Sesshomaru is tired. Please update soon.

Annie (Chapter 10) - Fri 08 Dec 2017

I feel sad for Kagetaro. What will happen to the general who had attacked Kagetaro wife. 

Please update soon.

Ryo chan (Chapter 10) - Fri 08 Dec 2017

Damn, it felt so short lol thanks for updating can't wait for your next chapter

KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

Great chapter! Very tense and a nice bit of mystery and intrigue going on. Palace politics can be deadly. Looking forward to your next update. 

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 9) - Thu 02 Nov 2017

Nice going on this chapter. I was a bit confused in chapter eight as to the reason for Sessho slapping Kagome. Was it because she was spying or because of his wayward emotions?

I like the air of mystery that was added in chapter nine. I love a good mystery. I also like where you seem to be taking this story and the development of the relationship between Kagome and Sessho. Keep it going.

Daniella (Chapter 8) - Sat 28 Oct 2017

Keep posting, please!!!

Nallely (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Oct 2017

Ok, you are con my favs now, this is intriguing.. Love it, i just wish you could update more ofthen. Keep it coming plase!!

KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

Well YEAH!!! Update!! Very nice. He’s melted a bit. Thanks so much. Watch that spell check s/b ceased not seized. Cheers!

KouseiJL (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Sep 2017

Erhu's do exist! They are a Chinese instrument though, but they do have a beautiful sound. :) My University had an exchange with Chinese musicians (our jazz musicians visited them!) and an Erhu player came to our campus. Kokyu is a similarly stringed/bow instrument from Japan... but I am unsure how long ago they were introduced. I know there is music for the instrument from the 17th century, but I don't know about earlier. Thank you for including music and instruments in your story!!

KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Thu 14 Sep 2017

The story is progressing nicely. I do have a seem to try and use too many words to get an idea across and that only makes it difficult to read. Here is one...What does he think of me? I am clever more than you think I am thank you very much. That should read "I am more clever than you think I am... There are several of these instances where the words are simply in the wrong place in the sentence. I'm not sure if you use a beta or not. A good way to check yourself is to read each sentence out loud to yourself. Hear how it sounds. I'm enjoying this different take on their story, I'll look forward to the next chapter. 

KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Wed 13 Sep 2017

Still interesting, if a little hard to follow whose POV we are following. Still seeing a few grammar errors and misused words. You made your point when she was in the library and then repeated it again in the next paragraph. You could combine those two paragraphs and still get your thoughts across. Writing is hard work, please don't get discouraged by my review. So how long has she been back in the Feudal Era? She still has a functioning phone? Is she still going back to her own time or has the well closed? 

KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Wed 13 Sep 2017

Wow. Very different. And interesting. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. 

Ryo chan (Chapter 8) - Thu 07 Sep 2017

This is very interesting im curious to see where this goes, I really hope you dont drop the story 

Zeelian (Chapter 5) - Thu 07 Sep 2017

The story idea is interesting, but the presentation needs a lot of work.

As it is now it comes across as a jumbled mess.

You need to be clearer on the PoW, not jump around without warning, half the time I as a reader have no idea or clue as to who is doing/thinking what.

InuKami-Sama (Chapter 8) - Wed 06 Sep 2017

I got so excited when I saw an update hit my email...and now I'm sad :'(....ill be waiting 

Blommie8 (Chapter 7) - Mon 04 Sep 2017
i hope he fall to kagome soon

Natalia (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Aug 2017

Dammit this autocorrector! I meant kagome's pov 

Natalia (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Aug 2017

So sorry for not reviewing sooner I was busy. And thx for the shootout it's appreciated!

I get it that it's more than meets the eye. His every action is under scrutiny.  I bet he wants to clean house,  maybe even for rin's safety.

The flashback was a nice one but one question observation,  it was from kagome's poverty? If so she couldn't see or hear his inner thinking since you show what she remembers. That is my only concern in rest a good chapter! Eagerly waiting for more, and if you need advice or help tell me I will gladly lend my eyes lol. 

Take care! 

Melissa (Chapter 1) - Wed 23 Aug 2017

The erhu is a real instrument

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Wed 23 Aug 2017

Very intriguing chapter. Sesshomaru does nothing or be OOC unless he has good reason. Kagome has to remember that she is in a castle full of demons with the exception of Sana and herself. 

Sessho may have been acting more kinder when he was in Edo but now he is back at his home with a lot of treacherus demons constantly watching his every movement and listening to the words coming out of his mouth. So with him being scrutinized, he would have to appear uncaring and ruthless, hence him acting the way Kagome is seeing him for the time being. Maybe Sessho is trying to ferret out a traitor or a bunch of traitors in his home and or among his counselors. Maybe Sessho killed Kazihiko. As large as he had been and her being a miko would she had used her powers and turned into a pile of ash and what would a small pocket knife do to a big demon such as Kazihiko?

Another thing, when Kagome was doing some flashbacks, I guess Kagome did not notice the sudden change in Sessho's attitude when she called him "big brother." Maybe he thought she and Inuyasha had mated/married and he may have had a moment of jealousy or hurt? Just a thought.

Looking forward to more updates soon.


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