I feel like such a dick, but I'm so pleased with this chapter! I didn't really wish bad things for Inuyasha and Kikyo, but it seemed so easy that it was almost superficial...I'm glad that if they manage to sort themselves out, it'll be at a better level. ON TO MY FAVORITE COUPLE, I guess there really isn't anything Sesshomaru can do but wait. I know that things aren't cleared up completely on Kagomes side, mainly because if it were Kikyo would know the specifics of her disagreement with their mom- it wouldn't be right for anyone to be left in the dark... How drastic will Kagome change? I hope not at all- I dont know if there are demons in California, but the thought that she'd see what she hadn't before can be shocking and I hope she can lean on Seshomaru soon
Lorena (Chapter 28) - Sat 12 Jan 2019
New reader here! I had to binge on it before I reviewed and I'm glad I did. I was really feeling Kagome and Sesshomaru, it's crazy how natural they seemed to be with eachother, but now I'm worried that this craziness will pressure them to something they hadn't imagined before. I feel really bad for Sesshomaru, will Kagome realize that Sesshomaru didn't know about this situation until after she left? It's crazy to think how coincidental this all was, but because of how intertwined they turned out to be it's easy to forget that Sesshomaru had no idea she was coming and more importantly, who she was when this assignment started and up until then...I am SO EXCITED to read what's next for these lovely soulmates in the upcoming chapters :]
Krista (Chapter 28) - Sat 12 Jan 2019
DAMN! I don't even know where to begin. The intrigue, the mystery. I'm excited to read more lol and I hope your Muse treats you well.
nicole (Chapter 27) - Sat 12 Jan 2019
He should write her a letter of his foolishness
Doug (Chapter 27) - Fri 11 Jan 2019
I think Kagome should have directed her anger and disappointment toward Sesshoumaru's father and her mother. Her mother is the one who lied to her since birth. Why would she assume that Sesshoumaru knew of the arranged marriage? She just jumped to the conclusion.
Her mother is the biggest liar and manipulator in this tale. She did not want her daughter to be in an arranged marriage so she told her husband the kid is dead, fled the country and kept lying to her children. If I were Kagome, I would cut off ties with that woman.
Nallely (Chapter 20) - Fri 11 Jan 2019
You are back!!!! It is such a great story and I'm glad that you are writing again. The little mistery has a twist... and Sessh reaction and decition is actually really nice. Hope you keep going with this story.
I am so glad that you are writing this story again. I believe I begged you to finish it a long time ago. If i am remembering it correctly, you have made quite a few changes. But I am really enjoying the new story. Please keep on posting.
I am absolutely loveing thr progress of this. Never stress the muse. It will only nag you until every last bit of ideas are in writing!
Ashes (Chapter 26) - Fri 11 Jan 2019
Thank God! Finally got the email on my phone that there was a update to a story I favorited.
Thank you being inspired, please stay inspired until the end, ne? I'd die waiting months again????????????
R (Chapter 26) - Fri 11 Jan 2019
Whew! You’re on fire! Ebjoyed the updates and glad you’re feeling so inspired!
I am absolutely loving the updates today! Four, and I hope there are still more to come. Finally Kagome learns the whole of the truth, and from a father she never knew she had. Plus the arranged marriage part between elder Taisho and her father. I cannot wait until futher updates. Please write more today, for I'm dying to know how Sesshomaru is going to get himself back into her good graces (if he even can). Wonderful writing, by the way! :)
I appreciate the spam chapters, they made my evening. This is an excellent story. Plot. Character development. Humour. Looking forward to seeing where it all goes.
Great story! I really enjoy how your plot is unfolding, and can’t wait to read the updates!
Unfortunately, I have no ideas to throw into the creative mix. I can say, however, that I love this storyline and I look forward to updates. Please don’t abandon the story.
K (Chapter 22) - Tue 08 Jan 2019
I really like where you're going with this story, there's a bunch of like twists and the character development is very nice :-) keep it coming!!!
Jennn (Chapter 22) - Tue 08 Jan 2019
Such a good story!!! Please keep updating! Your writing is great!!
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