Reviews for Captured by bastyn

LightoftheWest (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 Jul 2017

Hm still having trouble with the small font unless you're doing that on purpose. I like that you fixed some of the things in the story you might also want to try grammarly I use it all the time in my storiess. 

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