Please update your story's

Not bad dear.  I rather enjoyed it.  I'm sorry that i wasn't able to get back to you earlier, didn't realize my phone needed to be charged.  Anyway, I really did enjoy this chapter.  You really did do a good job on it.  :)

Where was kikyo to save inuyasha

What about a darker fanfic with Sesshomaru and Kagome. 
I can suggest Monster by Skillet

or if you don't wanna do a dark one, what about My life Would Suck Without You by Kelly Clarkson 

better than the first chapter   glad you kept it going   looking forward to more

She seems really dense in this fic.

Suggestion: Dangerous Mind by Within Temptation (I am pretty sure that's the song title.)

-Grins- I rather liked this one...

Hello :)

This is really a nice story. I really enjoyed it. And you know... I love Dark Sesshomaru Stories.

Seeing as the Sesshomaru in your story is (somewhat) a dark one, I would have expected a bit more detailed lemon. Don't ask me why. :D    but I missed it here.

I wouldn't mind another chapter. ^-^

Cheers

sorry that this is only a one shot  really enjoyed it