Ya know, this doesn't happen very often, but I absolutely speechless. I can't even begin to express my love for this. It's absolutely amazing, it's brilliant, it's amazingly executed. Kagome's transformation and her inner war, I love it. I mean, I feel bad for her, cause that's....yeah; but at the same time, that whole process alone is something to be admired. This book, story, what have you is amazing, and I can't wait to see what comes next.
Blessed be
REDWOLF (Chapter 17) - Thu 20 Sep 2018
A very good story! I hope you update soon ;)
Great update
Natalia (Chapter 17) - Fri 13 Apr 2018
Those siblings from the jewel are just annoying. So arrogant and willing to play with anyone for their gain. I get it that midoriko couldn't defeat them because they were united and she was one, but I hope this time kagome and the gang will finish them. They are not as strong alone only united so divide and conquer!
Thanks for updating.
ashley (Chapter 16) - Wed 04 Apr 2018
Please finihs this story!!! we have way to many great authers that dont finish and you have a great ablilty to make people want to read!!!
Hope for more updates
If the villain trio is the half of the jewel, where is Midoriko the other half? Then Kagome‘s half soul and Kikyo’s soul, what happened to them.
Still anxiously waiting for more!
Hope for more updates.
Amazing update! Can't wait for more!
Enjoying the story.
Natalia (Chapter 15) - Fri 25 Aug 2017
So... I really hope kagome's reproductive system changed and she is fertile only a few times a year like er animals? That's why she isn't pregnant. Is this time going to work? If so I can't help but think that it's too dangerous now since that witch is out to get her. Still believe karasunai is too powerful like unbelievable strong that can return life and sesshoumau didn't know about her? Fishy!
I actually believed kagome's would kill that kai jerk!
The for updating such a long chapter. Also I am so glad you'll work on your other story! I like that one too!
jodi (Chapter 14) - Wed 26 Jul 2017
Awesome job I love the story keep the good stuff coming
Rambo (Chapter 13) - Sun 16 Jul 2017
So, I found this story yesterday and have been zombied out at my computer every since. I am loving this story! And the audio choices? On point!! UHHH!!! Love it so much. I still get a little goosebumpy thinking of the transformation scene and "after" play!
I am loving your story and cant wait for more!!!
Good update
Natalia (Chapter 13) - Wed 12 Jul 2017
i knew that witch was inside the jewel! but wasn't that magatsuki in the manga? the one sesshoumaru slew with tenseiga? Was he the demon inside the jewel no?
well, creative license and all, its your fic so you decide!
i like the attention you pay to details, but didn't kagome started flying too easy and too soon? she never had a good grasp on her powers, only reacting on emotion, so maybe point that she had training or achieved control? again you decide, i like it either way!
thx for updating!
I just wanna say that this fic has got me hooked and I cannot wait for more! The fight scenes, the sexual encounters, everything! They are all great. I hope Kagome puts in some more hurt on that Kai dude. And hopefully she can show off her abilities to Inuyasha, too. TAKE THAT INUYASHA! xD
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