It is beautiful and heartbreaking .... But confusing? Sorry it's not clear what he did why he did so that just sort of leaves you wondering? Was that your intention? If so it's bullseye! Thx for posting!
Umm...I'm a little confused. You have the story marked as complete but to me it sounds far from it. What exactly happened in this story? Why is she so upset? What was it he did? Is this story really complete like it says in the summary because if it is, it kinda leaves the reader wonder what's going on. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just a little confused.
Please let it be a misunderstanding!
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