Nicole (Chapter 3) - Thu 25 May 2017

Poor Kagome. Dragged hither and yon and mates to Sesshomaru without a choice or knowledge of what was happening. I'm not impressed with any of the Inus for that one. (Chapter 4) I'm glad she'll get to keep her family, though. 

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 May 2017

What nice chapters from 2 thru 4. I think I see where you are taking this story. Sessho brought Kagome's family and cat from the future somehow and placed them in a pearl to keep them from dying. The thing with the mate transference was a brilliant idea but if Sessho mated Kagome would she have taken on his life span? Why would she need to be put in a pearl? I can understand Rin but Ah-Un and Shippo are demons, why would they be protected from time? I find this very interesting.

Keep up the good writing and work that you are putting into it. Keep it going and I am looking forward to future chapters to this intriguing story.

Great job!!!

Kagaku-sha (Chapter 1) - Wed 24 May 2017

I'm slightly confused. This isn't a one-shot any longer? Also where did Kagome's family come from? Were they brought from the future through the well or has 500 years passed from the time he put Kagome in the pearl? I think this story has major potential. Has the ability to be one of my favorite fics... but the jumping around is kinda strange. Maybe the next chapters will alleviate some of my queries. 

Nicole (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 May 2017

Looks interesting :)

Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 May 2017

interesting concept  looking forward to more

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 May 2017

This story sounds intersting and different. Nicely written. I wished the chapter was a little longer. Hope to see more updates and I hope you continue with this story. Looking forward to reading more. Great job so far and keep up the nice writing.

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