This is a very intriguing story. It is nicely written with an error or two here and there but nothing major to deter from the story.
It is interesting that Kagome can remember things from her early childhood. I know some people say that kids usually cannot remember anything when they are babies or little toddlers but I myself can remember a few things from my early childhood very vividley. So I find it believable besides she being a youkai it may be even a little enhanced but she is different to begin with.
I think Kagome needs to be unsealed because that may be the cause for her dying. Her body cannot heal itself. I wonder what kind of youkai will you make her...inuyoukai...lol. I think the kami is involved with her in some kind of way because where else would that thunder strike come from on a clear day to activate the well long enough for her to get back to her time.
Looking forward to future chapters so update soon. Great job!!!
Nicole (Chapter 3) - Sat 12 Aug 2017
A very curious and interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing how the story develops!
Violla (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Aug 2017
Molto bella
This is very interesting! I'd love to see what happens next :D
Toni (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 May 2017
please continue I like your story
Very interesting continue. Love to see where you take this.
Ohh please continue!!! This is interesting and I really want to now whats happenning!
Whoa, now that is a shocker. I wonder what she has and how long she has. I hope there is some kind of miracle for her. I'm already on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! Update soon!
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