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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Sat 24 Jun 2017

Very nice chapter that brought the feelings and emotions of both Kagome and Sessho. I don't blame Kagome to have doubts about Sessho and his motives after talking to the servants. But she is getting too wrapped up in being in love for the first to see what is really happening around her. She is taking his word on everything he is putting her life in danger with his secrets by dismissing her ordeal with the person that was trying to kill by making her believe that it was a dream or whatever.

Kagome should rely more on her instincts rather than her heart. By her being Rin's tutor she had access to a whole library of books and scrolls and I'm sure that there had to be books on the culture, traditions and customs of the inuyoukai along with other species. She should have at least taken advantage of the books and learned something about who she is living with. Did she think that they would have the same ideals as humans? naive of her...just like in Jane Eyre with Mr. Rochester. 

Is Kikyou in this story? Could she possibly be the strange woman that tried to murder Kagome and Sessho is trying to make her believe that it is all Kaede's doing? But why would she be there and what is her connection with the demon lord? I may be out in left field with this but could Sessho possibly be already mated and that is why he didn't ask Kagome to be his mate but only a consort/wife? Like what Kagome was thinking that the so-called marriage would be a sham in demon society and she would be no more than a whore. That is why she needs to learn these thing about demon society before she committs herself, something she should have done when she first arrived at the castle instead of taking everything at face value.

Nicely written chapter. I am looking forward to future updates and I love tihs story. Keep up the great work!!!

cassandra (Chapter 10) - Sat 24 Jun 2017

Why do I get the feeling that sesshomaru is keeping a big secret from kagome, and has been for a long time now? I can't wait to find out what happens next! 

Inuaddict (Chapter 10) - Fri 23 Jun 2017


So much suspense

I cannot wait till next Saturday

Excellent Chapter

Leahchan13 (Chapter 9) - Fri 23 Jun 2017

:') This chapter was beautifully written! I have tears in my eyes I'm so happy!

Leahchan13 (Chapter 8) - Fri 23 Jun 2017

I love the part where Sesshomaru asked Kagome would she stay with him if he where to go poor :') so beautiful! I'm so interested to know what's going on at the end~ 

Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Jun 2017

awe im so stinkin happy im cryin. its was so sweet, so elegantly written. ill read it again and again.  great work!!!!

Lady Crimson (Chapter 9) - Sun 18 Jun 2017

Let's start of by saying love this story but I was wondering Is there more to the story like something big happening with the east and Kautea as well as sith them since kagome is human or are you ending it here? Follow up question if this is the end will there be an epilogue?

Serinasu InuMiko (Chapter 9) - Sun 18 Jun 2017

Beautiful! I love how that came together.

Miss C (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

I want more. I can see this as a visual comic.

Anna Grey (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

It's so beautifull, oh IloveitIloveitIloveit so much, I'm crying right now. Everything is perfect, I just can't describe how I feel right now, my emotions are overwhelming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh how I love it when Sesshoumaru said "please" and when he knelt down...

Why next Saturday suddenly seems so far... I'm dying...

cassandra (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

So sesshomaru finally confessed his feelings. I can't wait to see how kagura takes the news!  Keep up the good work! 

Midnight Cat (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

WOW!! What a chapter!! I think my adrenaline is still way up because I feel as if I was on a happy high!! So excited, so happy!!! Oh please update soon again! My heart can't take much more and I seem to be in need of my next fix!!

xDori (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017


Inuaddict (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

and now I am sobbing. FINALLY THANK YOU

I am so HAPPY

I can't wait till next Saturday. 

Jamila Hubert (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

Ummm... Oh heck no!!! You are not gonna post this last chapter and pull on my heart strings like that! Mi cyah tek it (I can't take it)!!! Lol but yea, I really love your spin on Jane Eyre via My Second Self. I love how the emotions and situations while still fitting the story come to life in this Yashaverse.

I just want them to be happy. I just wanna kill Kagura for being a colossal asshole; even though I kind of understand she's kinda doing what she needs to survive in that society but on her terms. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed earlier in the chaps when I added the story to my alerts. Thank you, please keep writing this story. I've been hooked since Chapter one. 

Dedge (Chapter 9) - Sat 17 Jun 2017

I see what ya did!!!!!!! :D I love it!!!!

Miss C (Chapter 8) - Mon 12 Jun 2017

This story is well written.

Dedge (Chapter 8) - Sun 11 Jun 2017

???? The suspense is killing me!!!! D: 

Is he going to announce his feelings??? Ugh is something going to happen where kagome has to leave to take care of??? Ugh so many questions!!!!

Leaora (Chapter 8) - Sun 11 Jun 2017

Thank you for the extra long chapter, but it is never enough! Sesshomaru turns from the window and..........? What happens?!! I need to know! I loved his elaborate trick, but what is he hesitant to reveal to Kagome? Will he be openly hostile to Kagura after finding that she threatened Rin in the presence of his guests? Did Inuyasha mean for Sesshmaru to protect Kagome or his own fallen lover? I need to know! I love you! You're awesome! Please don't make me wait!!!!

Natalia (Chapter 8) - Sun 11 Jun 2017

Is this the erm fanfic of Jane Eyre? I think it is! I read it not long ago and this seemed familiar and only when he pretended to be the fortune teller I realised it! I am curious to see how you'll spin this! Good luck! It's a good interpretation!

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