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hailey (Chapter 15) - Mon 30 Oct 2017

I've spent the last 2 days reading this story. It is by far, one if the best fanfics I have read in a very long time. I cannot wait to read more. I hope that I don't need to wait very long. Thank you so much for creating and Sharing this story with us! 


ponpiri (Chapter 12) - Sat 09 Sep 2017

Btw how dare Inuyasha butt in when it's partially his fault his brother is in this mess. What a crock!


ponpiri (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Sep 2017

Usually I dislike first person narrative, but this is really good. Having said that, Kago is overreacting. Like... who wants to be stuck in Sesshou's position? But I guess it's understandable sinc she has low self esteem considering her background. Still, what more could you possibly ask from the guy in a sitation like this? She's being a bit much and kind of forgot how much she hated her human life in the first place. 


Bliss (Chapter 15) - Tue 22 Aug 2017

absolutely love your story I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon!


Inuaddict (Chapter 15) - Mon 14 Aug 2017

I love that you write with no drawn out unnessasary plot obstacles, I certainly feared that she would never reach Sesshomaru after hearing the story of his downfall, or that it would take ages for her to break the seal. 

And Oh! What a reunion, my heart could not handle it.

But the real question is - Where is little Rin?

Please update soon, I love this story so much. 


Miss C (Chapter 15) - Mon 14 Aug 2017

Bravo, what a beautiful chapter.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 15) - Sun 13 Aug 2017

I read this chapter early yesterday but had to rush out and I just remembered that I did'nt leave a review and here it is 4:30 in the early morning hour. 

Loved this chapter, so much like the novel but different adaptation. One can feel the sadness and despair that both Kagome and Sessho felt at first but then the elation between the two was very touching. I'm glad that Kagome was able to break the seal and now he can begin to heal. 

Things are winding down towards the end anything like the novel there will be a happy ending. Looking forwad to that ending because I want to read your version. I know it will be wonderful.

Exceptional writing style, I love it. Keep up the excellent writing.

 


Dedge (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

You did a fabulous job comparing this story to the actual novel itself but with its own twists and turns! I can't wait to see if you win awards for this piece! 

Good job!!!

Maybe you can do a pride/prejudice one next or something *wink wink*


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

Wooohooo finally back together!


Natalia (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

ah so sad so beautiful and so touching! 

even though I knew what happened I still almost cried!

true love conquers all!

thx for updating this beautiful tale!


lin91 (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

I know I'll be in the minority here.  But, he didn't want to mate her because she was worthless and he wanted to keep her a secret.  He was Kikyo's victim too.  Nobody has ever made sacrifices for him, but he was always shouldering responsbility.  And probably for the first time he was scared.  He really, deeply loves her!  Mistakes are made in every relationship.  But her response was to run away at night.  Woman up!  If you want to abandon him and completely cut him out of your life, fine (you're crazy, but fine).  Face it and don't run.  She responded awfully and let him down I think.  She only thought about going back when the people she was around upset her.  And what did she do?  Run.  For 4 years!  No letter or nothing  Will she run the next time she gets upset or will he be walking on eggshells forever?  I sat through and read the up until this point after a friend encouraged me to read.  I really liked her until she ran. Sorry, but I don't see him as this super villain or whatever that others may have gotten out of it.  I do really like the voice the author has and I feel involved in the story.  


Leaora (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

Ecstasy!!!! I took an extra long break from work just to read this chapter. It was worth it!!!


Mona (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

Where is Rin?  And did she heal his eyes?  Hopefully a new update will be out soo. 


Moonangel09 (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

I Love your story!!!!! I eagerly await updates. It is taking an interesting turn of evemts!


candy (Chapter 15) - Sat 12 Aug 2017

Oh wow I can't wait for more  


Leaora (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Aug 2017

Once again, outstanding!!!!! I hope that Shipp and Sango join her and Miroku scuttles behind in shame until he can be honest with Sango, apologize to Kagome, and redeem himself.


Connor Hansen (Chapter 1) - Thu 10 Aug 2017

I'm in awe of how well this captures the Jane Austen speech patterns and language, reminding me faintly of Dorian Grey. I love this to pieces already! Finally, anfanfic with orphan Kagome that doesn't end in her being brought to live with Inutaisho and the boys or something. Anyway, your work is really amazing and you nle have yourself a new fan!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 14) - Thu 10 Aug 2017

Another very emotional chapter that was exceptionally written. Kagome was right in telling Miroku that if he truly loved Sango then he should tell her his whole story, his feelings for her and give her the choice for herself. He should at least give her that respect. Sango's brother is most likely with Naraku under duress and that is why she cannot find him because as long as she has been looking for him, she should have found him by now. The ideal situation would have been Kagome, Sango and Miroku travel together looking for Naraku and possibly coming across Sango's brother on the same quest. Sango and Miroku could be the wedded couple and Kagome their sister.

Well anyway, Kagome seems to have made up her mind to go back to The House of the Moon and Sesshomaru. On her way back, she may even come across Naraku and with her awesome do away with him all by herself. Her powers may even break the curse that Kikyo placed on Sesshomaru freeing him. Who knows that maybe Kikyo may be linked to Naraku and if he dies so does she. Just guessing here...LOL

I hope and pray that you and your mom have favorable outcomes on your medical conditions...glad that you two are doing well thus far.


AshBee (Chapter 14) - Wed 09 Aug 2017

Usually I don't review often and don't like stories written in first person because they aren't done very well but YOU! You seriously make me think of older classics with the fluidity of your writing! Simply amazing! 

 

Hope you and your mother are doing well! 


Doug G. (Chapter 14) - Wed 09 Aug 2017

I'm sorry to hear about you and your mother's illnesses. I wish you both a full recovery.

 

I was delighted to see a new chapter today. Your story is among the few that I eagerly await updates for. It's a pleasure to read such a well-written story.

 

 


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