Reviews for To Be Alpha by Minime

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Loveyaa (Chapter 5) - Sun 08 Apr 2018

Uh oh...are they going somewhere better? I look forward to seeing how Kagome proves them all wrong and why she is trying to become an alpha in the first place. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

DevaG (Chapter 5) - Mon 02 Apr 2018

You have got my attention and I hope you will update with longer chapters. What did Kagome do wrong??!!  Did someone intentionally leave something out of her test packet!! Please update soon. 

SilverInu93 (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Mar 2018

I hope this is finished soon

critique (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2018

This is such a nice twist. Well I mean the whole story as a whole. I hope to read more! Keep up the good work. I am such a picky reader, details are enough for the imagination and storyline is flowing beautifully. Hope you have a good day.

xoMIA ;) (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Well I hope that means they get to be alphas. 

Zaac (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Noooooo! Kagome! She followed and did the test right. It was like that test That's designed to have people read the instructions where there's a whole lot of things to do and solve, but if you'd read the instructions, they say only do the last question. I hope this is another test and she's not leaving anytime soon. LOVE THIS STORY.



Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Can’t wait to read more!!!!:) I really like your story line so far!!!

Miladyknight (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Feb 2018

Please, take this up again, it’s intriguin.

Zaac (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

Really really good, entertaining, and regurgitating story.


Thank you for writing this story! 

Lana (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 May 2017

Very intriguing, though I would suggest making the chapters a bit longer. There is also some superfluous phrases and word use. If you would like I would like to volunteer to be a beta for you. You can PM me here and I will try to help as best as I can. But I like where this story could go! 

Zinhle (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Apr 2017

Please update and thank you for the story.

xoMIA ;) (Chapter 3) - Sun 23 Apr 2017

Very interesting 

InuKami-Sama (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

Love it so far! Longer chapters please. More please! On standby ;)

Leahchan13 (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Also this is your first story! Wow! That's amazing!

Leahchan13 (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Hmmm~ I'm so curious! This fic so very interesting I can't wait to see more! ^.^

Julya (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

you shurelily got me really intrigued. I'm really excited about this plot, waiting for more

Didi (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I have just read the first chapter and was immediately captured by your story. Can't wait for the next ones!

Kagaku-sha (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I'm reminded of one punch man, my hero academia and naruto so far with. Curious to read the next chapter.

Natalia (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I can't help but think that this is a crafty trap! The naruto exam comes to mind! Thx for updating!

Bianca Abreau (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I remember when my chemistry teacher pulled this trick to drive it home that we should be reading the instructions carefully when we do tests and assignments. It was basically a long thing of questions but the first question said to read the last one, which just said to only put down your name. So basically if you were following directions you would know that the only thing required of you was to put your name down. Now I don't know if that it what you did, but if it is then awesome! Because the sign of a good leader is not only to be able to give direction but to listen to the ones they are leading as well. You cannot lead anything if none will follow you, and people only stay (don't revolt) when they feel their voice is heard. An even better leader is able to take those voiced opinions/concerns/emotions and use them to better the group as a whole (along with themselves), for the leader is the head/mouthpiece of the group their actions representing the collective whole for all the results lay on their skills. Someone could mess up, and the fault will be laid on the leader since they are the ones that are supposed to be in charge. In my opinion. Regardless, I loved the new chapters and love the story so far. I can't wait to read the next one and hope you update soon.

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