Reviews for To Be Alpha by Minime

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Lana (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 May 2017

Very intriguing, though I would suggest making the chapters a bit longer. There is also some superfluous phrases and word use. If you would like I would like to volunteer to be a beta for you. You can PM me here and I will try to help as best as I can. But I like where this story could go! 


Zinhle (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Apr 2017

Please update and thank you for the story.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 3) - Sun 23 Apr 2017

Very interesting 


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

Love it so far! Longer chapters please. More please! On standby ;)


Leahchan13 (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Also this is your first story! Wow! That's amazing!


Leahchan13 (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Hmmm~ I'm so curious! This fic so very interesting I can't wait to see more! ^.^


Julya (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

you shurelily got me really intrigued. I'm really excited about this plot, waiting for more


Didi (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I have just read the first chapter and was immediately captured by your story. Can't wait for the next ones!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I'm reminded of one punch man, my hero academia and naruto so far with. Curious to read the next chapter.


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I can't help but think that this is a crafty trap! The naruto exam comes to mind! Thx for updating!


Bianca Abreau (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I remember when my chemistry teacher pulled this trick to drive it home that we should be reading the instructions carefully when we do tests and assignments. It was basically a long thing of questions but the first question said to read the last one, which just said to only put down your name. So basically if you were following directions you would know that the only thing required of you was to put your name down. Now I don't know if that it what you did, but if it is then awesome! Because the sign of a good leader is not only to be able to give direction but to listen to the ones they are leading as well. You cannot lead anything if none will follow you, and people only stay (don't revolt) when they feel their voice is heard. An even better leader is able to take those voiced opinions/concerns/emotions and use them to better the group as a whole (along with themselves), for the leader is the head/mouthpiece of the group their actions representing the collective whole for all the results lay on their skills. Someone could mess up, and the fault will be laid on the leader since they are the ones that are supposed to be in charge. In my opinion. Regardless, I loved the new chapters and love the story so far. I can't wait to read the next one and hope you update soon.


spalos (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I need more please! The story is very interesting so far and I cannot wait to see what will help next.


Yashida (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

Hmm, can't wait for reason she entered.


Jamila Hubert (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

I have to say, I'm hooked! Already at that, lol. I truly hope you update soon, because you have a new story subscriber. This is an amazing concept, and I honestly can't wait to see it all play out. "Who is Kagome Higurashi?" Because that's what I wanna read and find out about in this story. 


sesshouscat (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

love it 

it's very interesting love the idea please update soon


princess of the western lands (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Hmm interesting. Why is there no scent of mortality? Is kagome immortal or do her powers give her longevity preventing her from ageing? Will the daiyoukai allow her application to go through?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


KiwiRose (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Very interestin. I look forward to reading more. Very unique.


333Tenshi (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

This story looks like it will be interesting and I am looking forward to reading more so I hope it will be continued


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Apr 2017

Interesting


Anna Grey (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Apr 2017

It's quite interesting, a good start for a starter :)))))

I like the plot so far, it made me curious. Sorry I'm not a native Eng speaker, so I can't help you beta reading, but I will support you, please keep going!!


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