Reviews for To Be Alpha by Minime

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Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Mar 2024

Hi!

I hope you're doing well. I know that it's probably a longshot because you haven't updated in years but I hope one day you'll come back to this. I knew it was short and incomplete but the idea of this was too intriguing not to check it out. do wish the chapters were longer but I really like it and I would love to see where you go with this. I hope one day you'll come back and finish it!!


Blythe (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Aug 2018

Ah! I saw this story and though I look for chapter stories that are more developed (have more chapters published), I could not pass this up. Just the concept behind it had me hooked and your writing is rather nice. I know you haven't updated in a while and maybe you've abandoned this fic all together but I really hope not. I'd love to see how the story develops and see where it goes! It really is an excellent idea and releasingly different! Please continue it!


Loveyaa (Chapter 5) - Sun 08 Apr 2018

Uh oh...are they going somewhere better? I look forward to seeing how Kagome proves them all wrong and why she is trying to become an alpha in the first place. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


DevaG (Chapter 5) - Mon 02 Apr 2018

You have got my attention and I hope you will update with longer chapters. What did Kagome do wrong??!!  Did someone intentionally leave something out of her test packet!! Please update soon. 


SilverInu93 (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Mar 2018

I hope this is finished soon


critique (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Mar 2018

This is such a nice twist. Well I mean the whole story as a whole. I hope to read more! Keep up the good work. I am such a picky reader, details are enough for the imagination and storyline is flowing beautifully. Hope you have a good day.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Well I hope that means they get to be alphas. 


Zaac (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Noooooo! Kagome! She followed and did the test right. It was like that test That's designed to have people read the instructions where there's a whole lot of things to do and solve, but if you'd read the instructions, they say only do the last question. I hope this is another test and she's not leaving anytime soon. LOVE THIS STORY.

 

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

Can’t wait to read more!!!!:) I really like your story line so far!!!


Miladyknight (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Feb 2018

Please, take this up again, it’s intriguin.


Zaac (Chapter 3) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

Really really good, entertaining, and regurgitating story.

 

Thank you for writing this story! 


Lana (Chapter 3) - Wed 03 May 2017

Very intriguing, though I would suggest making the chapters a bit longer. There is also some superfluous phrases and word use. If you would like I would like to volunteer to be a beta for you. You can PM me here and I will try to help as best as I can. But I like where this story could go! 


QUEEN_Cypher (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Apr 2017

Please update and thank you for the story.


xoMIA ;) (Chapter 3) - Sun 23 Apr 2017

Very interesting 


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

Love it so far! Longer chapters please. More please! On standby ;)


Leahchan13 (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Also this is your first story! Wow! That's amazing!


Leahchan13 (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Apr 2017

Hmmm~ I'm so curious! This fic so very interesting I can't wait to see more! ^.^


Julya (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

you shurelily got me really intrigued. I'm really excited about this plot, waiting for more


Didi (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I have just read the first chapter and was immediately captured by your story. Can't wait for the next ones!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 3) - Tue 18 Apr 2017

I'm reminded of one punch man, my hero academia and naruto so far with. Curious to read the next chapter.


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