Reviews for Midoriko's Gift by Serena530

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Lady Lynn (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Is this chapter based on Sesshomaru's point of view before Midoriko's 'intervention'?


AlexisNight (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Guys.. Think for a second... I think midoriko didn't appear in her dreams in the first timeline because the she cannot interfere because it still didnt happen and now that she knows maybe she can still change her destiny... Don't hate the author because I for one, love that little tie bit... And beside did you all thought that this might be sesshy first timeline point of view?

Well that is my opinion.. Great work.. Looking forward to the next chapter?


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

this is a heartrenching story. i hope there is going to be a happy end.


Lorena (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

So I was sad already reading this is Kagome's pov, but I am beyond sad to read the loveliness of Sesshomaru's developing attraction and the eventual heartbreak- I was curious about something before and it officially pressed my thoughts now that Sesshomaru brought it up as well: Why did Inuyasha marry Kagome? Is it possible he realized Sesshomaru's feelings, or maybe he did it because Kagome came back and married her? 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Mar 2017

Ahh, but this time we have Midoriko helping...

Beautifully written, it was so interesting and a bit sad to read Sess's veiw of those years. I don't know whether I wanna smack him or hug him for beign overly considerate of Kagome's feelings for InuYasha. Either way wonderful chapter!


teresa daniel (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Mar 2017

I HATE THAT SHE MARRIED INUYASHA.......AFTER KNOWING HE KILLED HER......THAT WAS WAY TO STUPID OF A THING FOR KAGOME TO DO .........SHE WOULD HAVE NEVER MARRIED HIM KNOWING WHAT HE DID TO HER........NOT AFTER WHAT SHE WAS SHOWN BY MIDORIKO....SORRY HATE THE STORY IT SUX


cassandra (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Mar 2017

Hmm...This is starting to sound like a type of time warp. I hope this time around she doesn't go with inuyasha. 


Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 29 Mar 2017

well I'm sorry but chapter 4 just shows kagome as being stupid  showing the same mentality of any abused spoise especially since she was shown what would happen and she still put her self in harms way  no self worth at all 

I know it is your story but you show her as a total victim  with no intelligence answer sesh should have just outright told her what was going to happen for the second time and maybe she might listen  


Natalia (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Mar 2017

i am sorry but i feel silly it is just me that is confused? i get it that this is his pov and how the things happened but it seems the things came full circle... so this is the past past kagome that didn't receive midoriko's gift or what? then why she told him she was friends with him in the future... i apologize i am just stating my opinion ok?> no disrespect meants. its just confusing and stoping the plot, like reapeating everything again. we know it from kagome's pov. then you point he trained her in the future she is trained but obviously everything repeated? 

sorry about that, just the last chapter ended at the aparition of kagome so you show here the other kagome not the one with the gift so to say?sorry for blabering...thx for updating and take care! one confused reader.


Lorena (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Mar 2017

Oh man, I'm so glad I found this! I just became so overwhelmed by that all the sadness, what happened to Inuyasha?  Was the power of the beads the only thing stopping Inuyasha from being that way? I can't wait to see what Kagome has planned- my natural assumption would be that she'd try to change Inuyasha so they can live happily,  but that would be a very good KagSess story :)


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 3) - Fri 24 Mar 2017

My heart was pounding alonside Kagome's during her decision making haha 

Really, after seeing her past self end in that tragic and repulsing way the phrase 'making her skin crawl' at his touch is way too light for me. 

I wanna read the next chapter. This story is just too good :D


MythMagykFae (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Mar 2017

I can't wait for more!!!!


Miss C (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Mar 2017

Give me more!


teresa daniel (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Mar 2017

 HI,  I LOVE THIS STORY.......CAN'T WAIT TO READ MANY MORE CHAPTERS .......PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON WITH MORE THAN 1 CHAPTER,,,,,,,,,.....................PLEASE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.................................TDANIEL


MythMagykFae (Chapter 2) - Fri 17 Mar 2017

Holy shit! I can't wait to see what happens next!


teresa daniel (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Mar 2017

HI, I LOVE THE FANFIC  '' MIDORIKO'S GIFT ''  GREAT  BEGINNING .  I CANT TO READ MOREOF WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN. I  HOPE YOU WILL PUT UP MORE THAN 1 CHAPTER AT A TIME.CANT WAIT  FOR MORE CHAPTERS ....................................................................TDANIEL


Celestial (Chapter 2) - Wed 15 Mar 2017

I hope u update soon, i really like this story :3, it has great potential. I think this story will turn out great ^-^.


Jean (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Mar 2017

Good start, I look forward to the next chapter!


vhfluffy (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Mar 2017

Good start. Looking forwward to reading more!


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Mar 2017

Interesting so far 


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