excellent :)

I really liked this story, we got to see a different side of Sesshoumaru, and you made it believable, it was nice and refreshing. We also got to see Kagome grow and become her own person. I was really surprised at Sango and how she responded to the decision Kagome made, I was also surprised at Miroku but in the end he seemed to come around but even he was a surprise to me, they both knew how InuYasha treated Kagome through out there travels and it took something as serious as InuYasha losing his mind and becoming more of a threat for Miroku to come around. I just don't understand it, even if Sango had wanted they to all live in the same place and all that I still can't see her pushing Kagome towards InuYasha, and even though Miroku is very much a pervert he is also kind and protective of those he cares about, and both Sango and Miroku have a very strong sense of honor so how they were in this story was a real shock to me.

awesome story!

i really enjoyed your story.

Great story! Interesting plot. Loved every chapter! :) 

This is the 6th chp out of 9 it could have been used better esp since we're getting so close to the end. It kinda feels like a waste

Alot of this is rather redundant we read her vision already and we read her times with Sesshomaru. If you needed to put his pov then rewriting things we already knew was not necessary. Just give the readers the point where he had thoughts but get detailed from his point not everything we already saw in the past chapters. And there was no need to have us relive the whole dream trip Kags took either. Just point out if she purposely oeft out certain things and if she had questions for him. Otherwise this is a fairly intriguing tale. Sorry for any typos im in my phone and rushing

I think you do a great job with Sesshomaru. Balanced his nature with loving side he would show her very well. Inuyasha's end was inventive and deserved. So happy that Kagome didn't do the naive no killing thing but was smart and realistic instead. He wouldn't have stopped and it didn't take someone getting hurt to see that. Weirdly enough, I'm happy that her decision making and the last chapter wasn't spread out over numerous chapters. Her error filled beliefs and behavior about Inuyasha had run long enough and Sesshomaru deserved better. Awesome job with it, especially with such a difficult and layered plot. 

Such a shame Inuyasha had to die. Hopefully, he's with Kikyou in the afterlife. Obssession with your first love can be bad for your health. In this case, it resulted in death. 

Thats beautiful! Just the kind of world I can see her striving to make. (:

Love this story and I hope Kagome will defend herself should inu try to steal her away. That last section of the latest chapter left me on a bit of a cliffhanger with worry for our favorite character's future.

Wow, this story is intense. I love it. Wonderful job! :)

This is such an interesting story. Love how crazy Inu is :D

Demented inuyasha is interesting. Thanks

Dang... Inuyasha is going crazy. shoot! lol

Oh man, it seems like the future they wanted to will no only arrive, but quicker than expected! 

inuyasha has become down right creepy and needs to be locked up. sango and miroku some friends they turn out to be pff -.-

Oh gosh Inuyasha has gone crazy! This won't end well!

Wow that explains a lot, clinically insane he can do a lot of the stuff mentioned. I hope Kagome told Sesshou about his little brother's imaginary friend because she is really in trouble haha Funny how us modern people take these mental illnesses as alarming. I can't wait till the next part.

He's gone utterly bonkers! Kagome and the kids may wanna move to Sesshomaru's place... far from Inuyasha.

Wonderful chapter! Go Kagome with the good decision making!