So I have a few critiques for you and hope you use these as a way of improving your writing style. This is story is difficult to read in my opinion because of the overuse of bold characters. I understand you are using this style as a way to highlight dialogue, but you have already used quotation marks, so this really isn't necessary. If anything, it causes such a disturbance in regards to distraction.
Another thing that greatly confused me about your story was it seemed that there was no common sense involved while writing it. Albeit, I admit I only read a couple of chapters, but that would be due to the fact that I simply could not wrap my head around what the characters were doing and why they were doing that. It made no sense to me and came off insanely asinine. Like when Inuyasha demanded to see proof that the photos of her injuries by him were photoshopped, and then how you went about in showing the proof that her scars were real. LOL okay then. Oh and then when you wrote that whole debacle of how Inuyasha got INSANELY strong powers, strong enough that no one was able to stop him in a courtroom full of full fledged demons, and no one was able to break into a baracaded door to save Kagome from getting raped? Like you mean to tell me that Sesshomaru and all these other people were taking their sweet ass time to help Kagome when they KNOW Inuyasha is there on trial for attemped rape? Honey, that part seemed like you pulled something out of your ass so that you can spice up your story and keep it interesting. Sigh if only you thought things through a bit more.
It just seems like your whole story is trying to "push the limits" when really it just comes off quite confusing and strangely comical. You should also write a disclaimer on how totally OOC these characters are cause wow they are nothing like canon at all. Man at least give the readers a warning on how vastly different the characterization will be. I can definitely tell you are a novice writer and hope that you take a step back and reassess your writing style. Or at least post another warning that your story will be a crack-fic since this seems to fall in that category with all its tomfoolery.
Kagome's Mom is awesome!
Wow....I mean wow. So much action and intrigue, I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update.
I wonder what sangos real agenda is in all of this and why she hates kagome so much. I wonder what she's going to do with kagomes family. Can't wait to see what happens next!
(Chapter 2) - Wed 15 Mar 2017
That was very sad Kagome can't have children. That broke my heart.
Great start cant wait to see where this is headed!