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MythMagykFae (Chapter 11) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

Hmmm, I wonder what she wants...


Sarah (Chapter 11) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

I wonder what she will ask for.


Angela (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

Omg this just hit me hahaha this is me just thinking far ahead into the story but this is what i thought: the last sentence kagome said made me think that what if sesshoumaru's wish is to find someone to love and if he finds that in kagome then his wish has basically been granted but then once his wish has been granted he wouldn't need the shop anymore so he wouldn't be able to see her anymore ;_; NOOOOOO!! Haha but these are just my thoughts sooo yeah haha 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 10) - Thu 13 Apr 2017

LOL that conversatoin though...

Nice chapter!


Sarah (Chapter 10) - Thu 13 Apr 2017

Oh well we're finally getting somewhere he's actually asking what I think are the right questions we're looking for the right answers one of the other charges hell with this great chapter can't wait till the next one


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 07 Apr 2017

*wink not wonk lol


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 07 Apr 2017

Hint hint, why not add a wonk Kagome lol

Nice chapter!


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Fri 07 Apr 2017

He's going to scoff at that! Lovely update. I love Drabbles but oh...I just want more! Thanks for updating. 


Sarah (Chapter 9) - Thu 06 Apr 2017

(0.0) Nailed it on head with this chapter.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 8) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

More and more intruiging...


Aviel (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

This is quite a delightful story so far! Although I'm not familiar with Pet Shop of Horrors and xxxHolic, the names of both titles and their characters do ring a bell. I am enjoying the pacing in each drabble, and I appreciate how you manage to provide enough information in your descriptions without being too wordy. There's also a great balance of imagery and dialogue without one overtaking the other, which can sometimes end up being more tedious than helpful or even useful. I absolutely adore Kagome's formal introduction and Sesshoumaru's observation of "her bright blue eyes sparkling like sunlight on seawater." Just a beautiful use of words. I don't think my attention has been caught by prose like that in a very long time. Having said that, I'm a huge fan of your writing style! :)

In regards to the plot, I find myself just as intrigued as Sesshoumaru about the mysterious shop and its tenants. The shop's location reminds me a bit of 12 Grimmauld Place, and its function seems like the Room of Requirement from Harry Potter, except that our dear Lord of the West apparently has no idea what he wants yet. I love the push and pull of having some of his questions answered with such obscurity that it's borderline frustrating (for Sesshoumaru's sake) but also exciting at the same time. It's interesting how Kagome and adult!Shippou have pointed out his budding intrigue, but I get the impression that they're just as curious about his presence, given his prestigious title. It's a wonderful dynamic.

I look forward to your future updates!


Sarah (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Nice little cheaper


Sarah (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Mar 2017

Nice chapter can't wait for the next update


Sarah (Chapter 6) - Thu 16 Mar 2017

I absolutely love I've seen Pet Shop of Horrors and this idea is just brilliant the story so far is Well written and the plot I haven't yet figured out which is also terrific I can't wait for your next update


Elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Thu 16 Mar 2017

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I feel that it will be one of self-discovery. I look forward to your next update!


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Thu 09 Mar 2017

Lovely, maddening and enigmatic. Poor Sessh, everything that makes him crazy. Looking forward to more! 


Hati (Chapter 4) - Fri 03 Mar 2017

I love how it is going, though the slow pace makes me impatient haha


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 3) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

I love both of those shows! I can't wait to read more!


Angela (Chapter 3) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

Hahaha wondering if Kagome will be as eccentric and alcohol crazy as Yuko and if Shippo will be as erratic as Watanuki xD


Erica MacKenzie (Chapter 3) - Fri 24 Feb 2017

What fun! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.


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