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snow (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jan 2017

interesting very very interesting will kagome be ok with being courted? what will happen when Inuyasha and Kikyo find out she's alive and not dead? when will they see each other again  :o


tonya (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jan 2017

great chapter! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jan 2017

Awesome chapter. Kagome can kick butt now. I like how she stood up to and took down that whore of a demoness in the village they stopped at.

Won't Kikyou and Inuyasha be surprised when they come across Kagome's path. I'm sure that Sango and Miroku will leave with Kagome when they find out the truth of what really happened to their friend.

Looking forward to the next chapter soon. Outstanding writing. Excellent job!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jan 2017

Nice chapter!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

This chapter was amazing and it excited me.  It was very fortunate that Sesshomaru found her watched her come outof the ashes as a little cute chick. She is now with her chosen protector. By her description, she sounds beautiful. How tall was Kagome to begin with?

I am glad that shit for brains Inuyasha and his stinking corpse for a mate could not get what they wanted, I just hope they don't hurt Shippo thinking that he either has the shards or knows where they are. I believe that Sessho will retrive Shippo before they do something drastic to him.

I wonder what the gods have in store for Kagome and the jewel. She should be  more powerful now. Kagome must not be Kikyo's reincarnation if she did not get her full soul back even after Kagome died or was her soul was pulled away before her burned to ashes.

This storyis getting better by each chapter. I wish they were a little longer (hint..hint) lol...but I now how RL is and I appreciate what you can give us anyway.

Keep up the excellent writing job and I will be waiting for the chapter soon I hope (another hint...hint). :)


princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

Wow, awesome start for the story. So will she speak now? Will sesshomaru be able to get shippou before Inuyasha and kikyou hurt him? Why are sango and miroku acting this way? A spell or some magic? Is the well still going to work for kagome? Where's kaede in this?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


tonya (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

great chapter! please update again soon


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

"No more were her eyes brown. They were now a solid blue, like sapphires. Not even the whites were visible."

This is terrifying


Violla (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

Non vedo l'ora per il prossimo capitolo, aggiorna presto. 


snow (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

WOW, this is getting very interesting! I wonder if she will confront Inuyasha and Kikyo now or wait to do so. what will Sesshoumaru do when he finds out they tried to kill her :O


Cherryhair (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

I am ecstatic, I can't wait to see what happens. Inuyasha and kikyo suck and I can't wait for them to get what's coming to them. I love the idea of a phoenix. Please update soon I love your stories and know this will turn out great. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 Jan 2017

How cool! Fabulous chapter, betrayal, becoming a pheonix, Sesshomaru caring for a chick (adorable!), it was lots of fun to read! I look forward to the next.(:


tonya (Chapter 2) - Wed 28 Dec 2016

great chapter! please update again soon


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

I really like your writing style.  I liked how you started the story with the prologue because it caught my interest right away and it intrigued me to the point of wanting to read more. Setting up through flashbacks gave us the reason of what Kagome had to do in order to survive against Inuyasha and Kikyo's attitude and abuse toward herself and Shippo. It made me question her so called other friends nonchalant attitude toward her also. I am glad that she no longer has any romantic feelings toward Inuyasha and that it shows her maturity and critical thinking skills.

I love your story idea and plot. It is very well written and seems to have been well thought out. I am excited to read future updates to see where this story will take us. An excellent execution of the first two chapters.


cassandra (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

This sounds like a good story so far.  I'm curious to see what part the Phoenix plays in her life. Can't wait to see what happens next! 


snow (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

this story is interesting i cant wait to read more please update soon. thank you :)


channing (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

love it ready for more.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 2) - Mon 26 Dec 2016

This is a great set up, I look forward to the next chapter!


running1book (Chapter 2) - Mon 26 Dec 2016

I am really liking this!  I love when Kagome relizes that she does not have to stay with Inuyasha! Keep up the good writing!


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 1) - Mon 26 Dec 2016

This just might be great. Continue with this. you  have my interest.


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