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TeaAngel (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jan 2017

This chapter was soo freaking awesome!!! I could actually feel Kagome's pain from the betrayal of her mother and Brother???????? I cried and was like I hope grandpa really believed her. Dude I soo want Grandfather to kick Souta and kagome's mom off the shrine or at least speak his disappointment and disapproval to them both!! To make them hurt like they hurt her, but I don't wanna sound mean lol. 

 

I can't wait til the next chapter(s) come out.

 A devoted fan

TeaAngel


TeaAngel (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jan 2017

This chapter was soo freaking awesome!!! I could actually feel Kagome's pain from the betrayal of her mother and Brother???????? I cried and was like I hope grandpa really believed her. Dude I stop want Grandfather to kick Souta and kagome's mom off the shrine or at least speak his disappointment and disapproval to them both!! To make them hurt like they hurt her, but I don't wanna sound mean lol. 

 

I can't wait til the next chapter(s) come out.

 A devoted fan

TeaAngel


MythMagykFae (Chapter 5) - Tue 17 Jan 2017

Go Jii-Chan! I'm glad at least one of them got it! Sesshomaru is great in this chapter, and the changes in Kagome are cool to see. (:


cassandra (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

Wow. I can't believe most of kagomes family doesn't believe her. At least her grandpa is still there for her so far. I can't wait to see what happens next! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

I loved this chapter, very nicely written. I thought it was awesome that Kagome could still go through the well and bring anyone and all her pack to the future with her. To bad Ah-Un and Jaken will not be with them or will they? lol

So Sango and Miroku betrayed her too, that is sad. Here I was thinking that they were in the dark about the situation with Inuyasha and Kikyou. Well I don't feel anything for them now. And I cannot believe Kagome's mom and brother would say such things to her and side with a traitor. I wonder how they will feel when they finally realize the truth.

I am so enthralled with this story and cannot wait for the next fascinating chapter. Excellent job!


Taneesha (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

I loved this chapter I enjoyed watching the progress that was made between the two. I'm really disappointed in the way the family acted but it make sense with how attached they were and how they feel that kagome has a temper. I'm really looking forward to when they see the group again.


snow (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

I like the way you are going with the story. Everyone always paints her mother and brother so saintly but they are very attached to Inuyasha so I figure they would do something like that.  good story so far cant wait to read more keep up the fantastic work!


Ree-san (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2017

Really love this cha9and the plot!


snow (Chapter 4) - Wed 11 Jan 2017

interesting very very interesting will kagome be ok with being courted? what will happen when Inuyasha and Kikyo find out she's alive and not dead? when will they see each other again  :o


tonya (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jan 2017

great chapter! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jan 2017

Awesome chapter. Kagome can kick butt now. I like how she stood up to and took down that whore of a demoness in the village they stopped at.

Won't Kikyou and Inuyasha be surprised when they come across Kagome's path. I'm sure that Sango and Miroku will leave with Kagome when they find out the truth of what really happened to their friend.

Looking forward to the next chapter soon. Outstanding writing. Excellent job!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 4) - Tue 10 Jan 2017

Nice chapter!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

This chapter was amazing and it excited me.  It was very fortunate that Sesshomaru found her watched her come outof the ashes as a little cute chick. She is now with her chosen protector. By her description, she sounds beautiful. How tall was Kagome to begin with?

I am glad that shit for brains Inuyasha and his stinking corpse for a mate could not get what they wanted, I just hope they don't hurt Shippo thinking that he either has the shards or knows where they are. I believe that Sessho will retrive Shippo before they do something drastic to him.

I wonder what the gods have in store for Kagome and the jewel. She should be  more powerful now. Kagome must not be Kikyo's reincarnation if she did not get her full soul back even after Kagome died or was her soul was pulled away before her burned to ashes.

This storyis getting better by each chapter. I wish they were a little longer (hint..hint) lol...but I now how RL is and I appreciate what you can give us anyway.

Keep up the excellent writing job and I will be waiting for the chapter soon I hope (another hint...hint). :)


princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

Wow, awesome start for the story. So will she speak now? Will sesshomaru be able to get shippou before Inuyasha and kikyou hurt him? Why are sango and miroku acting this way? A spell or some magic? Is the well still going to work for kagome? Where's kaede in this?

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


tonya (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

great chapter! please update again soon


Nathaniel z Alexandria (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

"No more were her eyes brown. They were now a solid blue, like sapphires. Not even the whites were visible."

This is terrifying


Violla (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

Non vedo l'ora per il prossimo capitolo, aggiorna presto. 


snow (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

WOW, this is getting very interesting! I wonder if she will confront Inuyasha and Kikyo now or wait to do so. what will Sesshoumaru do when he finds out they tried to kill her :O


Taneesha (Chapter 3) - Tue 03 Jan 2017

I am ecstatic, I can't wait to see what happens. Inuyasha and kikyo suck and I can't wait for them to get what's coming to them. I love the idea of a phoenix. Please update soon I love your stories and know this will turn out great. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 Jan 2017

How cool! Fabulous chapter, betrayal, becoming a pheonix, Sesshomaru caring for a chick (adorable!), it was lots of fun to read! I look forward to the next.(:


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