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Toni (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

I really hope you find it in you to continue this story even though you marked it complete  it's really good


jk (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

Are you freaking kidding me. It feels like you are dangling a carrot in front of us. Still doesn't feel finished, i even pictured sesshomaru kneeling and begging for forgiveness. Please continue its something different for a change.How one persons choice can lead to so many different choices and path. please Please continue, would love  to read what solution the uncle will come up for this situation and sesshomaru finally acknowledging that he loves her and lost her.


Alashia (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

Awww. .  . you should continue with this story.


KeikoTakataxx12 (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

You should definitely make another chapter! I absolutely loved this


natalia (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

For me this ruined it even more. Sorry about that but i regret reading... Your ideas are amazing and i adore your fics but you ruined this for me even worse... Sorry!!! It's just so.... It leaves such a bad taste in my mouth... I regret reading.. it's not the fic it's me, my fault. It's just not my cup of tea. It doesn't necessarily need a happily ever after but an understanding end should be nice and the way you made kagome agree to ten kids... It made me sick to my stomach but it's only my opinion! Take care and thx for writing!


Desiree Nickels (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Mar 2017

Please update soon


lonny (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Jan 2017

It's really good !! Perfectly written I'd say.  Unfortunately it's a one shot.  (ToT)

 


beachvilla (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Jan 2017

great story, even if I am sad it is a one shot. :)


DeathDagger (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jan 2017

This is beyond cruel!


[silent.shadow] (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

What a jerkface. I'm glad that they don't just fall into his arms. Poor Kagome.


Cheryl (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Dec 2016

i can't believe this is a one shot~~!! this is so good, the flow, the character portrayal, the feels in this is going so well! please please do continue this if you can, i was really getting into this and just like that its finished :( 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

This story was great, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! 


Future Perkins (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

This is very well written, you have a lot of talent and shouldn't let it go to waste. Keep going, this fanfiction is worth the wait. The story is flowing nicely, and your characters while borrowed are portrayed better than any I've seen yet. You've really captured what Sesshomaru and Kagome would be like in modern times. Congrats on your success! Please do continue this story, I'm very interested in what lies ahead. Til next time friend 


Jennifer (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

I like it but I don't think I'm satisified enough to love it hehehe. Come on Happy Ending with some good ole fashioned angst middle scenes. You've given me a slice of cake but my appetite is used to the whole cake with ice cream on the side. Happy Holidays! great story as always!


LibraCourt (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

Not bad was liking it, but for a one shot it doesn't seem finished. Nothing got resolved really. They just kind of bullied Kagome into going with them. She hates Sesshoumaru and his son fears him. Makes me wonder how it was going to work out in the end or was she just going to deal with it and be miserable while Sesshoumaru thought about the past he forgot about when he had enjoyed being with her?


Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

really liked it  too bad it's a one shot


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

Sesshoumaru is always spouting about how strong and in control he has over himself. It sounded like his control was slipping from him while he was Kagome in college. His beast chose Kagome to be their mate but Sessho refused the beast because it sounded like the beast wanted to break her and abuse her probably for not submitting. That was seven years ago when Kagome had ambition and plans for her life until Asahiro came along. Now seven years can change people and circumstances can change. Sessho should have learned self control, he claimed he loved Kagome very much but he totally forgot her when searching for his heir. Some kind of love.

I don't like the way it ended but it was a vey nicely written one shot. Maybe one day you may change your mind and expand on this story.


jk (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Dec 2016

Hi I liked the story where it was going but it was too short and had an ubrupt ending didn't feel finished. In a way you let sesshomaru win after what he did. Expected more though,but good writing. Merry Christmas 


Nicole (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Dec 2016

Oh! How heartbreaking and horrifying!


natalia (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Dec 2016

I can't say the end satisfied me... You and your love for dark and tragic dramatical things... Sighs... It was beautiful but it ruined my mood and exactly for Christmas! You are cruel! Thx for writing! Merry Christmas!


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