I enjoyed reading this story...very well written! Though it's a cliffhanger? I believed this isn't yet finish...i feel there's more for this story...i hope you could find your muse and time again to continue such AMAZING story ! Thank you for sharing this love! xoxo
I really enjoyed reading this very well written second chapter. There is still a bit more to this story that I can see but then it's not my story but yours. lol If only Sessho and Kagome can fix what they broke for the sake of their child. At least Sessho does now understand a little more about why Kagome made the deal to mate with the uknown youkai to have children for him. I think Sessho should open up and come clean about his true feelings about Kagome from the beginning of their relationship that created their son.
I wonder how Sessho is going to try and break off Kagome's conractual mating to this unknown demon and if she may already be carrying a new child. How will this affect Asahiro when he finds out about his other siblings? I think he will want to get to know them and form a bond with them. I also think that Sessho cannot be holding any grudges about against Kagome for her mating because after all the matings he went through and gotten rid of his ex mates, besides he should have used his so called superior brain and figured out that he already had an heir after not getting one from his first mating instead of blaming it on the females he went through. How egostical that man is. lol
I am so looking forward to the next installment if you deem fit because ths is so not over yet in my own opinion (smiling to myself). I'm loving this story.
Raven (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Mar 2017
This is just TOO good!!!! Really hope you decide to continue this I'm dying to see where this goes. There's no promise of a conventionally happy ending and THAT is what has me hooked. Awesome writin, amazing work!
Drianax (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Mar 2017
You need to expand this into a full fledged story...you can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that!
Please Update Soon
Bambi (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
Hi, are you going to be continuing? I fell in love with this in only two chapters. I would appreciate a bit of closure so much!
Cinno (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
Please update and make this into a story this is a amazing story and i want to see what happens please update soon :)
Abogoh (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
Such a sad story. She's already mated another youkai and now Sesshomaru regrets his own actions. I dunno, I hope there is something good in the future for them, otherwise, it's too depressing. Good writing!
Sarah (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
Since the agreement was to prevent Sesshomaru from finding out about his son, why would she keep going now that he knows? And how did she really think to hide a pregnancy if she wasn't going to tell him at first?
Yaaaas. I've been waiting for this update. Such suspense!
Awww da....you are killing me. This is gold.
I. Want. More.
So obviously, this is muy, muy excelente.
Nicole (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017
I'm glad you decided to continue this. If it ends here, this is still more satisfying than the end of the first chapter. I do hope you choose to continue it again, though.
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