Weird story but interested in what happens next. Don't know weather to feel pain for Kagome or anger at the new woman who
might become jealous anyway. stay safe!
I like the story. It is very good. I like how everyone has a important motivation.
Ana (Chapter 3) - Tue 24 Apr 2018
Great character build up, loving the story. Would love to read more.
Would love another chapter in this!
Gah I don't know why but I like this please keep going
snow (Chapter 3) - Fri 20 Oct 2017
This story is actually very good for only having 3 chapters it's going very good so far I do wish there were more chapters to read through. this chapter had me feeling really bad for Kagome and Sesshoumaru, at first I thought he was being an asshole but now he seems to be developing well in this chapter makes you feel some pity for him as well. the other male who she mated. I can understand the situation but he asked for far too much. I wish there was a way to fix it so he can mate his wife and Kagome can mate Sesshoumaru. lol, i can't wait to read the next chapters still to come!
hope you update soon!!! im so in love with the story!!!
misty (Chapter 3) - Fri 21 Jul 2017
ooooooh- please update again, this is getting good.
Lorena (Chapter 3) - Wed 19 Jul 2017
I guessed he had a lover, but not a wife, lol. I hope Kagome gets out of the 8 other births, but not by death. I'm feeling a bit demanding...I'd hate for her to have sex with anyone else in his line for the sake of breeding, I reread it but I just assumed he'd be the father of all10 births
marisel (Chapter 3) - Mon 17 Jul 2017
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That doctor used her. Can wait until they find out how she has been trea9. They should be able to void the ,rain and the agreement under those conditions. Good story let see if you can finished it.
Leticia (Chapter 3) - Mon 17 Jul 2017
I am so happy you decided to continue the story. About him having a wife I was like "whaaaat?!?!?!" But she doesn't seem like she likes Kagome much lol. Can't wait for the next update
Jelly (Chapter 3) - Sun 16 Jul 2017
Omg Blue, I swear this story is the only soap I willingly watch/read!!!! That doctor...ugh! How is it possible to both empathize with and hate someone?!! *cough* Onigumo... Hoshiomi... Manten... - Cause really? Hiten looks like that and just... Savage. Genetics were just savage, man. *cough* Anywho, I digress, a wife?! A part of me isn't surprised and the other is... "Well hey it's probably his sister so... no babies..." and the other still just wants to kick him in the jingle bells. Even with all that I still just want to say how much I love this story and am so deliriously happy that you updated it. The tension between Sess and Kags is both heart-wrenching and addictive. I can't wait for their explosive make-up! Or at least I'm pretty sure it will be explosive. After so much pain, how could the make up not be utterly fantastic? Oh! And also, Kedakai... I just want to thank you for his awesome, because he's one of the most wonderful voice-of-reason characters I've ever experienced. And just, thank you. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
That asshole of a doctor! That is some evil shit. He totally is taking advantage with no moral conscience to speak of! And Sesshomeru. Damn I am pissed at him but feel sorry for him because even I dont know what he should do in this situation. If he does nothing the doctor will continue and Kagome will probably lose her mind at 10 births (which is rough even with a healthy mind!). If he presues her she will pull away because of what happened 7 years ago. I do admit that I think Kagome thinks a lot in her feelings and not rationally. Granted her situation is HARD but still I dont think her remating was really thought through. ANyways update soon!
Kae (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jul 2017
no kidding plot twists! ALL over the place! I'm glad they finally talked, but Sess is still trying to do things more on his terms. He's gonna have to learn!
Damn! You don't know how much feelings you have put in this poor kokoro of mine....the shower scene i almost couldn't take it and by the moment kagome had passed out dang it killed me straight to my kokoro....and that bastard doctor had wife!!!! He's an asshole!!! I hate him so much! Poor kagome...i hope sesshomaru would find that out...your evil twisted plot had almost kill me woman that's because you're awesome you know how to get through to your audience heart. I love you!
Natalia (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jul 2017
Ah it still hurt reading this chapter again! I liked how you reworked it! I am glad kagome told him how she felt after the shower! I am glad she explained why it still hurts! The added scenes at the end are perfect!
And tada the other woman appears! You made her his wife? That is good but it is a step toward kagome's freedom! I wonder if the council knows of this?
My heart is hurting! Please update sooner so we can see the resolution! Please!
Thx for the treat!
Que gusto que la hayas continuado, es una buena historia! Voy a cruzar los dedos esperando por el siguiente capítulo pronto! :)
Saludos!
Sarah (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jul 2017
If all they're after is her having their children they don't have to have sex for her to get pregnant, it can be done clinically. I just don't see why they have to make her sleep with whoever when this is the modern era and her mate is even a doctor
misty (Chapter 2) - Sun 04 Jun 2017
sesshomaru just seems to be digging himself even deeper into his hole.
please update, i keep wondering just how badly he'll fuck up before things get any better.
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