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spalos (Chapter 2) - Mon 17 Apr 2017

God damn it this story is amazing and beautiful and kind of painful to read. The whole damn time I was reading it I had tears in my eyes and my heart hammering away in my chest and I just felt so bad for Kagome and Asahiro and the situation they are in. I need another chapter but i dont know if i am emotionally ready for more crying and honestly this story is amazing because it is so damn relatable. Please update soon.


Ame (Chapter 2) - Wed 05 Apr 2017

NO! This may be more frustrating than the original ending of chapter one. A Good ending, but not what I want!
I know they can't all be happy happy joy joy but I hope you'll decide on at least one more installment to give them at least a grudging acceptance of each other.... 


sesshomarus_side_chick (Chapter 2) - Wed 05 Apr 2017

Please continue with this story!! It's really good and I'm hooked!!


inuyashaloverr (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Mar 2017

I LIKE this!


lacey (Chapter 2) - Sun 26 Mar 2017

This story is amazin!! I would love it if you continued it!!


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Mar 2017

I enjoyed reading this story...very well written! Though it's a cliffhanger? I believed this isn't yet  finish...i feel there's more for this story...i hope you could find your muse and time again to continue such AMAZING story ! Thank you for sharing this love! xoxo


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Wed 22 Mar 2017

I really enjoyed reading this very well written second chapter. There is still a bit more to this story that I can see but then it's not my story but yours. lol  If only Sessho and Kagome can fix what they broke for the sake of their child. At least Sessho does now understand a little more about why Kagome made the deal to mate with the uknown youkai to have children for him. I think Sessho should open up and come clean about his true feelings about Kagome from the beginning of their relationship that created their son.

I wonder how Sessho is going to try and break off Kagome's conractual mating to this unknown demon and if she may already be carrying a new child. How will this affect Asahiro when he finds out about his other siblings?  I think he will want to get to know them and form a bond with them. I also think that Sessho cannot be holding any grudges about against Kagome for her mating because after all the matings he went through and gotten rid of his ex mates, besides he should have used his so called superior brain and figured out that he already had an heir after not getting one from his first mating instead of blaming it on the females he went through. How egostical that man is. lol

I am so looking forward to the next installment if you deem fit because ths is so not over yet in my own opinion (smiling to myself). I'm loving this story.


Raven (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Mar 2017

This is just TOO good!!!! Really hope you decide to continue this I'm dying to see where this goes. There's no promise of a conventionally happy ending and THAT is what has me hooked. Awesome writin, amazing work!


Drianax (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Mar 2017

You need to expand this into a full fledged story...you can't leave us with a cliffhanger like that!


Desiree Nickels (Chapter 2) - Tue 21 Mar 2017

Please Update Soon


Bambi (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Mar 2017

Hi, are you going to be continuing? I fell in love with this in only two chapters. I would appreciate a bit of closure so much!


Cinno (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Mar 2017

Please update and make this into a story this is a amazing story and i want to see what happens please update soon :)


Abogoh (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017

vhfluffy (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Mar 2017

Such a sad story. She's already mated another youkai and now Sesshomaru regrets his own actions. I dunno, I hope there is something good in the future for them, otherwise, it's too depressing. Good writing!


Sarah (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017

Since the agreement was to prevent Sesshomaru from finding out about his son, why would she keep going now that he knows?  And how did she really think to hide a pregnancy if she wasn't going to tell him at first?


The-infamous-one (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

Yaaaas. I've been waiting for this update. Such suspense!


Lady Amalthea (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

Awww da....you are killing me.  This is gold. 

I. Want. More.  

So obviously, this is muy, muy excelente.  


Nicole (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

I'm glad you decided to continue this. If it ends here, this is still more satisfying than the end of the first chapter. I do hope you choose to continue it again, though. 


snow (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

damn so shes basicly fucked because of sesshoumaru she has to do what that youkai says or she will die and leave her son alone damn that sucks.


Roseanna (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Mar 2017

I am really glad a second chapter was posted for this story.  I didn't review the first chapter, and I'll explain why.

After reading the first chapter and seeing it was a one-shot, I went "Bleh!"  I suppose the main factor was that Sesshomaru got -most- of what he wanted (his son) and Kagome had to "give in" to their demands to remain with the child.  I just found that to be completely irritating, though I was glad that Sesshomaru seemed to hold some kind of remorse for Kagome's plight.  I just didn't want to review as it was a one-shot with one chapter, and I was ambiguous about the entire thing.  I tend to not like the "Sesshomaru gets what he wants" stories so much, as it's too redundant and prevalent throughout Sess/Kag fanfic.

Now, reading chapter two -- boy, did I jump up and down.  While the story still leaves a lot of questions unanswered, I had to do a fist-pumping motion when Sesshomaru realized he might have truly lost what he really wanted -- Kagome.  Now, with the revelation of Kagome's situation and agreement, that doesn't preclude something happening overall in the end.  And the entire scenario of Kagome and her agreement is a very strong and "willing to do nearly anything" character motivation to be with her son.  I find it uplifting, personally, that she would sacrifice years (or maybe decades) of her life and even her health to ensure she's around for her son.  It gave a very "I'm not going to just sit around and let things happen to me" impression in my mind, and not allow others (especially Sesshomaru or another male in the story) to solve her problems.  Very pro-active in her decisions to fix her issues.

Now, I hope that this does turn into a chapter story, for it is really different from nearly all other stories I've read so far.  The relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome, their respective relationship to their son, and the outside characters that also factor into the plot... just so different that I'm really interested to see where things lead. 

So please consider continuing the story! :)

P.S.  You have a fantastic writing style.  Keep it up!


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