damn so shes basicly fucked because of sesshoumaru she has to do what that youkai says or she will die and leave her son alone damn that sucks.
I am really glad a second chapter was posted for this story. I didn't review the first chapter, and I'll explain why.
After reading the first chapter and seeing it was a one-shot, I went "Bleh!" I suppose the main factor was that Sesshomaru got -most- of what he wanted (his son) and Kagome had to "give in" to their demands to remain with the child. I just found that to be completely irritating, though I was glad that Sesshomaru seemed to hold some kind of remorse for Kagome's plight. I just didn't want to review as it was a one-shot with one chapter, and I was ambiguous about the entire thing. I tend to not like the "Sesshomaru gets what he wants" stories so much, as it's too redundant and prevalent throughout Sess/Kag fanfic.
Now, reading chapter two -- boy, did I jump up and down. While the story still leaves a lot of questions unanswered, I had to do a fist-pumping motion when Sesshomaru realized he might have truly lost what he really wanted -- Kagome. Now, with the revelation of Kagome's situation and agreement, that doesn't preclude something happening overall in the end. And the entire scenario of Kagome and her agreement is a very strong and "willing to do nearly anything" character motivation to be with her son. I find it uplifting, personally, that she would sacrifice years (or maybe decades) of her life and even her health to ensure she's around for her son. It gave a very "I'm not going to just sit around and let things happen to me" impression in my mind, and not allow others (especially Sesshomaru or another male in the story) to solve her problems. Very pro-active in her decisions to fix her issues.
Now, I hope that this does turn into a chapter story, for it is really different from nearly all other stories I've read so far. The relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome, their respective relationship to their son, and the outside characters that also factor into the plot... just so different that I'm really interested to see where things lead.
So please consider continuing the story! :)
P.S. You have a fantastic writing style. Keep it up!
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