Reviews for The Heart by Crimson Rose

teresa daniel (Chapter 4) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

I THINK YOU SHOULD HAVE IT BE SOMEONE FROM KAGS PAST THAT LIKES HERV TOO ....BUT THAT SHE CARES FOR AS FRIEND BUT WHO SHE BEGINS TO DATE TO HAVE SOMEONE TO SPEND TIME WITH SO SHE'S NOT LONELY......BUT THE GUY KNOWS HOW SHE FEELS FOR SESS... SO HE DECIDES TO DATE KAGS TO SEE IF HE CAN MAKE SESS JEALOUS ENOUGH TO DROP RIN WHO A SELFISH, SELFCENTERED BITCH WHO HATES FOR SESS TO TALK OR SPEND TIME WITH ANYONE BUT HER. AND SOON EVERYONE BEGINS TO SEE RIN FOR THE BITCH SHE IS WHEN SHE STARTS TO TALK BAD ABOUT KAGS, SPREADING RUMORS AND LIES, AND IS OVERHEARD  BY SESS ,INUYASHA, KIKYO,SANGO,AND MIROKU.LISTENING TO HER SPREAD WHAT THEY ALL KNOW TO BE LIES ABOUT KAGS THEY ALL DECIDE TO GIVE HER A BIG TASTE OF HER OWN MEDICINE . BUY SPREADING ALL KINDS OF RUMORS ABOUT HER AND TURNING EVERYONE AGAINST HER BECAUSE NOW THE WHOLE SCHOOL KNOWS WHAT SHE IS AND WHAT SHE HAS BEEN DOING TO KAGS AND ANYONE ELSE WHO TRIES TO TALK TO SESS . BECAUSE SHE'S A JEALOUS,BACKSTABBING, WHORE WHO GETS CAUGHT BY SESS AND FRIENDS WITH ANOTHER GUY HAVING SEX AT SCHOOL, WHO IS AN ENEMY OF SESS'S . 


Ariannani (Chapter 4) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

I was so happy to see an update with this.  I really enjoy your work and would love to see more.

 

I think it would be nice to be someone from her past that she was really close to before the move.  Someone like Bankotsu that she has one of those flirty relationships with but not really a romance per say.  


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Thu 26 Apr 2018

Nope...Sess being with Rin still does not appeal to me for the same reasons as before. lol :(

Thanks for the update. Nice chapter.

I think the mystery person should be someone from Kagome's past, like maybe Bankotsu, Kouga or even maybe Hojo (but only as a last resort).

Seeing Kagome spending a lot of time with this person may open up Sess' eyes and let him see what he has lost or endanger of losing...her love and friendship that is more real than what Rin is offering (which is superficial).

But the mystery man could also be her dear best friend from her past like maybe Shippo...who will alleviate her loneliness. At least she can start to laugh and have fun instead of moping around waiting for Sesshomaru. I hope she gives him a run for his money. lol :)

Looking forward to future updates soon.

Great job!!!

 

 


teresa daniel (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Apr 2018

HI, COULD YOU PLEASE UPDATE  '' THE HEART ''.......IT HAS BEEN 6 MONTHS SINCE YOUR LAST UPDATE.......HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR FANFIC SOON .....I HAVE REALLY ENJOYED READING WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN SO FAR.......


teresa daniel (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Apr 2018

SESS IS A FOOL.....I HOPE KAGS DOES NOT FORGIVE HIM AND STARTS TO IGNORE SESS AND ALL THOSE WHO ABANDONED HER ..GIVE SESS A TASTE OF WHAT IT IS LIKE TO BE WITHOUT HER AROUND.. SO HE OPENS HIS EYES TO RIN'S SELFISHNESS AND JEALOUSY OVER KAGOME. I HOPE YOU HAVE SEVERAL MALE  EXCHANGE STUDENTS START AT THE SCHOOL MAYBE 2 TO 4 GUYS AND HAVE THEM ALL START VYING FOR KAGOME'S ATTENTION ASKING HER OUT ON DATES ,SENDING HER FLOWERS AND GIFTS,SITTING NEAR HER AT LUNCH OR IN HER CLASSES AND TALKING TO HER CARRING HER BOOKS TO HER CLASSES AND OFFERING TO GIVE HER A RIDE HOME.... STUFF LIKE THAT.


teresa daniel (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Apr 2018

HI, LOVE THE FANFIC ...I HOPE YOU UPDATE REALLY SOON AND OFTEN......I ALSO HOPE YOU DONT DROP THE STORY ...TO MANY START A SYORY BUT NEVER FINISH IT ....SO PLEASE UPDATE OFTEN.


Wid0w (Chapter 2) - Mon 31 Jul 2017

Aww :( this is really sad and kinda shitty of her friends. I hate those friends who get so wrapped up in a relationship that they forget everybody else. It's really disheartening. But great chapter! I'm really enjoying the flow of your story! 


Wid0w (Chapter 1) - Mon 31 Jul 2017

This is an interesting start. I'm really excited to see how this plays out and the different dynamics between characters


REI-Angel (Chapter 2) - Sun 30 Jul 2017

I like where this is going. Update soon!


Mona (Chapter 2) - Fri 28 Jul 2017

Interesting, I hope to read more soon. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Dec 2016

Love your new story. Well written as usual.

Somehow the pairing of Sessho and Rin dosen't quite sit well with me. I always think of incest or pedophile because I am so use to thinking of Rin as a little girl or as his daughter. lol

Looking forward to future updates.


Ema holman (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Dec 2016

Well written and packed full of emotion.  Great job cr!  I look forward to seeing more.


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