I like it! nice adaption of sesshomaru cheating. I look forward to reading the rest.

Well well well Sango goes started the lie about Kagome supposedly cheating on Sesshomaru.   That would explain in Chapter 2 how she was dressed in a nice little sexy number and how she smirked when she fed him her sweet little poison lies.  I  hope that Kagome uses this to her advantage and even congratulates Sango on her little deception to Sesshomaru.  In fact I would set it to where she and Sango meet at a café of sorts and 'talk' like they were still best friends, but have it to where Sango ingest a truth serum of sorts that's undetectable except for the spellcaster.

Sesshomaru needs to be scared and for go reason since he's been lied to by Sango and he killed his offspring in his anger from the lie he's been fed with...I wonder how he'll take it once he discovers that he indeed killed his own pup and there's proof that he is indeed the father...Sango is indeed in serious trouble.  I know his instincts are fighting him even now stating that Kagome never cheated on him and that he was lied to by Sango.

I can't wait for more chapters to come.

Okay, I see where you changed this chapter around. This makes sense in how and why Sessho started cheating on Kagome and him being the one that caused her to lose their baby. As much as I love my Sessho, I absolutely would kill him in this story. He is an evil jerk and there is no forgiving him in this one. I hope Kagome leaves him broke and destitute.

You did a good job on this chapter. Keep it going and I am looking forward to future chapters.

Okay,im a little confused is he cheating with sagno or not or have we just not got there. 

Poor Kagome... Fluffy has made some serious mistakes!

Interesting... Sometimes I try to read subject matter I normally avoid to see if my tastes change, and I see they haven't. It seems I'll never be great with infidelity, but it was well written! Thank you for providing a read that almost tempted me :)

Sesshomaru got played by Sango really good, didn't see Sango's smirk. Sango lied to Sesshomaru about Kaome 'cheating' on him for lustful purposes.  How long before Sesshomaru finds out that Sango lied to him? And how long Kaome is going to find out how 'loyal' Sango is and the lie she fed to Sesshomaru?

He couldn't even justify his own actions....smh. I am excited to see Kagome start her new life....I am soooo looking forward to how it all plays out and I hope she gets a little one with her new relationship.

PLEASE UPDATE SOOON! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT! NEEEED TO!

Please, please, please contimue with this story. The introduction is really great! And it would be intresting on where you take this story.

Please make this a chapter story.  We don't get to read about badass kagome she always gives in. Please . Please 

I think this would make an interesting chapter fic in my opionion. It was a great one shot and I'd love to see it expanded on.

Good opening chapter, I would continue to read if you decide to write more.  There has not been a lot in the way of new stories here lately as there used to be, so carry on!  Glad to see that she isn't a wimp and is letting him have it.  Hope to read more soon!

I love that Kagome is confident and strong. I hope you continue and let me say I would be more than satisfied with an outcome that doesn't include Sesshoumaru as her happily ever after as in this case he already botched the half-assed attempt......twice! I would like to see her snatch his world away while she happily moves on with light shoulders and a peaceful heart . Most people are never required to pay for their wrong-doings and therefore never learn right from wrong. It will be a beautiful ending when he is smacked by the reality of his situation. I think he doesn't really care for Kagome as he has cheated on her twice and has maintained a years long relationship with her suppossed best friend. How could anyone not question the character of someone who would do that to someone they claimed to love, but then again like attracts like so obviously he and Sango see no wrong in their actions. I am happy her heart has moved on to another and I hope we get to see their relationship grow. Great start!

I absolutley love ot, i am at work moght get fired for how engrossed i am in thos one chapter. I would love to read a continuation. And i will read the original as well. Good job

Completely and totally different from your other version.  You definitely need to turn this into a chapter story, too good to leave this way.  I need to know what is going to happen to Sango, what exactly did she tell Sesshomaru Kagome was doing, and especially his reaction when he realizes he has lost EVERYTHING!!!!

Omg!! I'm in love already!!

keep going!!!  Please don't stop

i can't wait for the next chapter! ????????

im loving kagome's attitude! ????????

Oh.... love the Kagome that isn't bending over backwards for him. This is such a good start. Hope to see where it goes.

Get him, kagome, get him!!

I read the old one first because after reading your new story 'His Disobediance", I went to your profile and read the older version of this story and I thought to myself it was a nice little one shot but it could be more and low and behold here it is a newer version. It is perfect. It is very nicely written and it is off to a good start that is if you continue to write it as a chapter story. I don't think you need a beta cause in my opinion you're just that good. Excellent writing.

I love how you protrayed Kagome as a strong and intelligent woman.  Sessho will rue the day he literally fucked her over. I'm glad there was a prenup in their arranged marriage.

I was thinking he was screwing around with Kagura because you had mentioned that she was beautiful with her red eyes in the older version. But using Sango as the culprit was brilliant and of course Sango would lie to Sessho about Kagome's so-called infidelities. Why do most people always believe what other people say about their significant others before finding out the truth for themselves? To be betrayed by so-called best friend(s), I would ask myself why would this person or persons be a traitor to a friend. Jealosy, envy, hate and greed. Those are some things that can lead to murder, loss or ruin. Sometimes all three, but Kagome being Kagome would not stoop so low as to murder someone but take everything they have....yes. Sesshomaru should leave Sango and he should find out about her treachery. My guess is that he never loved Kagome as much as she loved him.

I hope you continue this story because I am fascinated by it already. I am looking forward to as many updates you can pump out if RL will allow you. lol  :)