Ah I'm so excited for the last chapter. I just hope you address why Naraku is so obsessed with her and not just the jewel.
I have been reading this story with bated breath. It is interesting and well written. I can't help but to think that kagome is very stupid for someone who is supposed to be smart. After learning about Yuki, her Rikki and the effects the powers have, not once did she even try to figure out how to use it or ask her family to teach her Basics about using it. From the start she felt uneasy around Naraku but still she refused to take any precautions to take care of herself. Most women, statistically speaking, that tend to fall prey to attacks such as rapes are the ones who ignore their internal instincts. Several times she had warnings to turn back, something didn't feel right, and yet she still went ahead. She knew she wanted to have someone there with her yet she wouldn't bring anyone to scout the place? She knew that her Fortune was bad, she found it, but she still ignored it. Didn't she say she was going to take it seriously and like take matters into her own hands why would she ignore it? I'm so frustrated with her decisions and what she chooses to focus on. I really can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter and I look forward to reading until the completion.
Oh, I also have a couple of questions.
1. Does Koga know she has spiritual powers? And if so, and he wanted to be friends with her especially after knowing how things were progressing with Naraku, why didn't he try to offer some kind of assistance in that respect?
2. Does youki energy affect all humans in these ways? Or is it more profound with Kagome because she has spiritual powers? Isn't it kinda like coersion to generate these feelings to make a person more susceptible to the advances of the youki? Aka koga & kagome? Wouldn't this make a person who is generally not into you more receptive to your advances when normally they wouldn't want you? How does he justify a sexual relationship with her? While Naraku chose to inflict a sickening feeling and sesshomaru a calming influence, would they all be able to affect her in the same ways if they wanted too? Does Naraku affect her like that because he is hanyou? Or because of his intent? I'm just curious.
I think it's amazing that you can evoke such feelings from your readers. Thank you for sharing the story with us. Please keep up the good work. PR
Ah Kagome! Can’t believe you did that! Glad Sessh is a suspicious dog! Great jam packed chapter! Ugh! I think you topped your last creepy level with Naraku. Thanks for the update. Cheers!
Minime (Chapter 16) - Sat 28 Apr 2018
I love it! Cant wait for the next one.
Natalia (Chapter 16) - Sat 28 Apr 2018
I enjoyed the chapter I really did. It was long coming, but the whole time I could only think how disappointed I am that Kagome went there alone. Like she was such curageous last chapter, growing up and making sound decisions when bam, she again takes a decision on a whim and goes alone in a place where youkai battle to the death, great thinking girl! It just frustrated me so much. Like seriously, here she is scared of death or naraku and she goes alone to a far away place on her own. Where is her logic?
I am so sorry. I am not trying to be ride or offend you. I adore this fic and if I am frustrated it's because it's brilliant. Thus only shows that jagoKa is human. And I absolutely love her portrayal.
I get it that it's a love stist and sesshoumaru has to have some feelings or even love her, but at this point in time I see no happy ending for them at all. I don't really know what sort of revelation or marvel has to happen for them to be together since how I see it and how kagome feels it, he does nor care for her. Now as a rwader I can say there is something there but only because I know the pairing and expect it but in rest? How poor kagome thinks he hates her... Like I said a truly big miracle and I can't see sesshoumaru proclaiming his love onia bent knee
So I am really curious how you'll spin this. I thank you for updating. I love it! And you did great for someone who hates violence. The fight scenes were so well described. I could never write like this. A big thank you again for updating. Have a nice weekend.
Awesome chapter...so very well written as usual.
Kagome, Kagome, Kagome...sometimes the sheer stupidity of her at times. What would posess her to go on an advance recon of the meeting place alone? Because I'm Kagome and I have a habit of doing dumb shit and I don't think of consequences until the shit hits the fan. LOL :)
Regardless of the fact that she did give notice to her friends as to where she was going, but little that would do if she was caught in some serious trouble, which she did...almost or did lose her life.
Lucky for her Sesshomaru showed up, but how did he know she would be there...a day in advance?
Did he find out what Naraku's plan was or did he use what he knew about Naraku and Kagome's thinking processes were, thereby making an educated guess?
Sesshomaru is or was a very frustrating enigma, in this wonderful story that I happen to love by the way. :)
I wonder what caused him to pause and give that surprise look in his eyes while he was assessing Kagome's wellbeing in the cave?
When he sniffed her, did he smell her growing power or could it be that she may be pregnant with his pup or her arousal or may be she was in heat?
I think Sesshomaru genuienly cares for Kagome but they may just end up as fuck buddies or maybe in a committed relationship...who knows!!!!
Looking forward to the last chapter and the final epilouge.
Excellent artistic writing!!!
Lammy (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Apr 2018
I love this story! So well written...a terrible cliffhanger indeed!
I have loved this story since I began reading it. You have a brilliant way of writing; you manage to suck your reader into the story and have them desperately get lost in the story. And then when the chapter ends, they are literally left waiting.
As I was reading this chapter, I kept thinking "Stupid Kagome!" in my head when she advanced on the cave. And the end: that was one of the best and worst cliffhangers ever. Best, because I can see why you eneded the chapter the way you did. Worst, because as a reader, I hate the idea of having to wait to find out what happens.
My only problem with this story is that I can't figure out Sesshomaru in this at all. Normally, I know what Sesshomaru is going to do, or I expect the story to end in a certain way. Here, I have no clue what he plans to do with Kagome. (Of course, the foreshadowing with the sword gives me an idea, but besides that, I really have no clue what he's thinking.) To be honest, I think that part of your story, the fact that I'm able to understand and interpret the actions of every character but Sesshomaru kind of bothers me. That's great though! It's literally leaving me wanting and needing to read more to learn the conclusion.
Keep up the amazing writing!
KH :)
Alashia (Chapter 15) - Mon 23 Apr 2018
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update!
Yeah! Finally she is standing up to him and gathering an ‘army’! Nice update. Thanks so much! Looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!
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