Reviews for Omikuji by ironlotus

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Shiiiii (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Mar 2017

Amazing! I love the cultural information and the overall feel of this story. I look forward to new updates! Good luck with wedding planning!


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

Ah. All caught up with this delightful story. I hope we see more of it soon. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 4) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

How very interesting. I love the informative notes at the end on culture. I lived in Soeul for a year but I was in the military and I lived on the base so I never really noticed if there were street names or not. I know the sections of town were named. Probably much like Japan. 

 

Yuck, Naraku is such a slime wad. Ewww!  Damn! Kagome! Don't let him even suggest that! She's too nice. She needs a little Southern girl in her...Excuse me?? Nice chapter. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

I'm so enjoying this story. The interactions are great. Miroku is so Miroku! LOL! Sango needs to get I've him a good scare. Hate a sloppy kisser. Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Feb 2017

This is starting out very nicely. I'm looking forward to reading more. I like how you are bringing the characters into play. 


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 5) - Sun 26 Feb 2017

Aah! Update soon! I can't wait to see their reaction to the next encounter!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Sat 25 Feb 2017

I just came across this very nicely written story of Japanese culture and university life. I like the way you are potraying Sessho and Kagome and of course that sleezy Naraku. I am beginning to love this story.

It seems that Naraku has done this kind of back door sleeziness before and have gotten away with it. It also seems like he has a pattern of doing it in a way that it would look like it was the young lady's idea to come on to him by using her grades against her. Like with Kagome, she probably did have a good essay and he took maybe one or two missteps and blew it out of proportion to get her flustered and upset to the point where she had to go see him. He of course set it up when no one was around, so he could have his way with her. Good thing Sessho came just in time to save her. But is it still considered fraternization if she is seeing Sessho or is it different because she has no academic interaction with him?

Wonderful story and congrats on your engagement. Cheers to your beta also. Looking forward to future chapters soon. Great job!!

Btw, I will check out those links you left in this last part.


Jean (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Feb 2017

Wonderful story so far,  I love your writing style! I'm wondering if you are going to have them be demons or not? Can't wait to see where it takes us, and congratulations on your engagement! 


Leahchan13 (Chapter 5) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

Kags just bolted out of there! XD omg I can't stop laughing! :,D


Petrina (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017

Congratulations on the nuptials.

And well done on a fascinating story and great characterisations. I particularly love your attention to detail and the notes on life in Japan.

Can't wait to see what happens next between our 2 heroes and creep Naraku. 


Toni (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017

really enjoying your story   looking forward to the next chapter 


Julya (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017

OMG, I just love this plot so much. You're style is really captivating. I was literally holding my breath 'till the last line of it. Eagerly waiting for more


Neelixonee (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017

I'm so glad to have stumbled upon this story.  I thoroughly enjoy your take on the characters and their world.  Please carry on! ?


Alondra (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017

*glares*...I checked RELIGIOUSLY FOR UPDATES!! And I was not disappointed :D. I am so glad you updated since there is nothing I hate more then finding a good fanfic with only a couple chapters and no update in sight. But I totally get its easy for us to demand and forget that the author is a person with their own lives and dont sit slaving away for our pleasure lol. Wonderfully written, I dont know if I noticed it or missed it but maybe make kagomes internal thoughts a different font? But even if you dont keep doing what youre doing awesome work and im glad you updated!


Miss C (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Dec 2016

Can I just say, Naraku is a creep.


Crimson Rose (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Dec 2016

I really love your writing style, everything flows perfectly with just enough description that it isn't tedious. Can't wait for the next update!


tai (Chapter 3) - Sat 19 Nov 2016

It's been an amazing read so far! I love the authenticity you try to keep, it makes it much more real. I'll be patiently waiting for the next update :)


sesshomarusama33 (Chapter 3) - Thu 17 Nov 2016

I love what you have so far. I can't wait to read more!


KayAkuma (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Nov 2016

Very interesting!! I'm hooked! can't wait to see more.


Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Nov 2016

really enjoying your story   


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