I just came across this very nicely written story of Japanese culture and university life. I like the way you are potraying Sessho and Kagome and of course that sleezy Naraku. I am beginning to love this story.
It seems that Naraku has done this kind of back door sleeziness before and have gotten away with it. It also seems like he has a pattern of doing it in a way that it would look like it was the young lady's idea to come on to him by using her grades against her. Like with Kagome, she probably did have a good essay and he took maybe one or two missteps and blew it out of proportion to get her flustered and upset to the point where she had to go see him. He of course set it up when no one was around, so he could have his way with her. Good thing Sessho came just in time to save her. But is it still considered fraternization if she is seeing Sessho or is it different because she has no academic interaction with him?
Wonderful story and congrats on your engagement. Cheers to your beta also. Looking forward to future chapters soon. Great job!!
Btw, I will check out those links you left in this last part.
Jean (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Feb 2017
Wonderful story so far, I love your writing style! I'm wondering if you are going to have them be demons or not? Can't wait to see where it takes us, and congratulations on your engagement!
Kags just bolted out of there! XD omg I can't stop laughing! :,D
Petrina (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017
Congratulations on the nuptials.
And well done on a fascinating story and great characterisations. I particularly love your attention to detail and the notes on life in Japan.
Can't wait to see what happens next between our 2 heroes and creep Naraku.
Toni (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017
really enjoying your story looking forward to the next chapter
Julya (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017
OMG, I just love this plot so much. You're style is really captivating. I was literally holding my breath 'till the last line of it. Eagerly waiting for more
I'm so glad to have stumbled upon this story. I thoroughly enjoy your take on the characters and their world. Please carry on! ?
Alondra (Chapter 5) - Tue 21 Feb 2017
*glares*...I checked RELIGIOUSLY FOR UPDATES!! And I was not disappointed :D. I am so glad you updated since there is nothing I hate more then finding a good fanfic with only a couple chapters and no update in sight. But I totally get its easy for us to demand and forget that the author is a person with their own lives and dont sit slaving away for our pleasure lol. Wonderfully written, I dont know if I noticed it or missed it but maybe make kagomes internal thoughts a different font? But even if you dont keep doing what youre doing awesome work and im glad you updated!
Miss C (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Dec 2016
Can I just say, Naraku is a creep.
I really love your writing style, everything flows perfectly with just enough description that it isn't tedious. Can't wait for the next update!
tai (Chapter 3) - Sat 19 Nov 2016
It's been an amazing read so far! I love the authenticity you try to keep, it makes it much more real. I'll be patiently waiting for the next update :)
I love what you have so far. I can't wait to read more!
Very interesting!! I'm hooked! can't wait to see more.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 15 Nov 2016
really enjoying your story
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