I am confused. Did you repost this fic or is it new because I read one almost exactly like it. It goes like this
Kagome and sesshoumaru are in high school, she is hiding something
Her dad abuses her sesshoumaru doesn't know.
Her dad sells her to naraku as a slave,property
Naraku rapes her
Sesshoumaru saves her
Naraku goes after them yada yada.then he tells the school and her mom that she is a .... Bad word. Sesshoumaru protects her. The end.
No offence meant I am just curious is this the same fic or you are only writing it?
Anyway good luck!
This is a great story, it gives me thrills just by reading. Please update soon!!!
The upset you've left me in is indescribable. Kagome needs to be updated soon or I am going to lose it.
Very glad you continued. I'm hoping kagome gets out of this situation before irreparable damage is done to her...
I'm really hoping sess can figure out what's going on and help kagome... other wise, she's toast
First off good chapter I was so glad to see that you Updated and sorry about you having the flu. I hope you feel better. So in the part with InuYasha an Sesshomaru having breakfast you have (At least you eat before putting your smart enough to eat before you get your cloths on.) That was the only error I saw, other wise great chapter. Can't wait for the update.
Glad your better. Loved the effect part. Thanks for the update.
Can Sesshoumaru not use his demon hearing to find out what happening now? Too bad she cannot defend herself against her Dad. This is an interesting story and topic. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Also, I think Sesshoumaru'a mother will do a little digging of her own. Thanks for the update.
I like the tension Kimi brings into the room. Good chapter, update soon
Nooooo!!!! Why must you leave cliffies. ???????? Anyway this was a good chapter. You mentioned Sesshomaru's mom being at dinner. But you didn't mention her. Please update soon
Every chapter pulls me deeper into the story. I really didn't want the chapter to end. Really glad he didn't rape her. I'm also wondering if Toga or Sesshomaru senced something wrong with Kagome. Updated soon
This is a great first chapter. I like the idea of Sesshomaru not knowing about Kagome's family problems. Please updated soon.
I am hooked! This story has a wonderful beginning. You did a great job reeling the reader in and wanting more at the end of the chapter. Please update soon. I cannot wait for the next chapter!