Please continue this. It's amazing

good story so far, but the random use of vocabukary is unnecessary. it makes you look like yer using (coughrapingcough) a thesaurus or using suggested words made by Word, not smart. sorry if this may seem a bit harsh, but look at this as constructive criticism. after ”exiguous” it was getting rather annoying. simple words could suffice and go a long way.

So sad you stopped updating this - it was an amazing story!

Wow you really made me kinda hate Inuyasha lol. You really showed how selfish and hateful he is. But I love the story and I love Sesh in it . Please keep hoing

I love this story, and I look forward to each update. 

I'm not sure Hakai is ready for Kagome tho. LOL

Oh WOW...Inuyasha is really being a pain! This story is just so fun and exciting!

Great explanation but trouble is brewing. Great update. Thanks!

This was a sweet introductory chapter and nothing "slow" about it.  You set the framework for impending action and gave us the break-down of how the characters are going to align for your action.

The little tidbit of the little innocent creature watching gave a tweak of mystery and I look forward to what she will do to shift the situation that her "brother" put in place.

Wonderful chapter and I sure didn't see THAT coming! Smiles! Very nice. Cheers!

looking forward to more!

I'm hooked! I binge read the entire story in two days. I must say that it is extremely well written and entertaining. I love how you stayed true to Inuyasha's character, his relationship with both Kagome and Kikyou and his inability to sort out his feelings. I really enjoyed reading about Kagome and the processing of her emotions for the hanyou as well asSesshoumaru's denial and confusion of his growing feelings. I can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome story!

I kinda saw the father thing coming. It's like introducing a gun into a story. You are foreshadowing that it will be used in the story, even if you intentionally did or not. When you mentioned Kagome's father, I realized that he may play an important role in the story, maybe not being the god of love, but someone important. I know you didn't just do it to draw comparisons between her and Sesshomaru. All in all, I am pleased. Just keep on writing.

So which god was the voyeur watching this? ;)????????

"Her friends would insinuate she was a fool for lingering around the indecisive man, but Kagome knew they didn’t know what real love was. All they knew were the boring, sex-crazed boys of her time, they couldn’t relate to her complicated relationship with InuYasha at all." 

They may only know about sex-crazed boys but isn't Inuyasha basically a sex craved halfling who seems to be heavily into necrophilia. Yeah,she's right. They can't comprehend the relationship.

"She wore a smirk on her face. “Where I’m from, ballet is the epitome of grace and guess who’s been taking it since she was a kid?” He merely shrugged. She rolled her eyes. “Ugh! Me! I took ballet! Geez!”

He stood patiently with his arms crossed. “Proceed then.”

 Kagome was a bit nervous. It has been a while since she has practiced"

 Ha! When you say you can do something, but you haven't done it in a while.

This story is amazing :)  I just started reading it last night and I just never read anything like it, before. This is fantastic and so, well written! You thought of how,when,and the wheres. You gave it guidance, cared about each and everyone of your characters. Keep up the fine work. Well done!!    -_*   :P

Huh, cool! I can't wait for more, I wanna see Hajime expalin, and how things will pan out with InuYasha...

wonderful chapter!

Awesome chapter! can't wait for the next update and the explanations from Hajime.

This is such a great story. I know it's going to end soon, but please make it longer. I really don't want to end. I need more.

Omg!!! That was amazing, XD to think that kagome could be half love God XD and now inuyasha knows about sesshomaru and kagome, what a reaction XD I was so happy, I can't wait for your next chapter.