Reviews for Advisor by Alon

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KShadeslady (Chapter 24) - Wed 08 Aug 2018

Ah! That was amazing! I love how she has turned the tables. Thank you for three love updates. 

JoLynn (Chapter 24) - Thu 02 Aug 2018




LMAO. That might be my favorite sentence in this whole story. Omg! ????

VS (Chapter 24) - Thu 02 Aug 2018

Thank you so much for updating more than one chapter per sitting! :D I hope my request wasn't too much...

I see Sesshoumaru is progressing...he is writing TWO to THREE sentences now... O.O ...he deserves some applaud ;)

I like the idea of the "secret language" and I see that Sesshoumaru is slowly warming up, he is already insulting humans by comparing them to the abilitys of demons ;) Kagome's answer though was the best!!!

You made me laugh again, so thanks! I'm looking forward to your next update!

KShadeslady (Chapter 23) - Wed 01 Aug 2018

How very funny! Points to Kagome! Men (or demon lords) are simply not equipped for these contests. Lovely update. Thanks so much. 

VS (Chapter 23) - Mon 30 Jul 2018


Sesshoumaru is really pathetic :D He wrote in his diary only one sentence? And even this one sentence didn't say something about himself ... I'm really wondering how Kagome is able to deal with him! I would be a hysterical mess after that!

But she is an intelligent girl ;) She knows how to play games, and I'm really curious to see, what she will do next!

Also thank you for the information concerning the language! I didn't know that!

As always well written and funny updates! I'm looking forward to your next update! Though I hope you could update a few chapters in one sitting!

KShadeslady (Chapter 22) - Sun 29 Jul 2018

Oh! Too funny!!

KShadeslady (Chapter 21) - Sat 28 Jul 2018

Very nice update. Can hardly wait to see what he has written. Thank you. 

VS (Chapter 20) - Sat 28 Apr 2018


usually I'm not a big fan of drabbles, but your fic is really nice written and absolutely funny!!! Poor Kagome...I really pitty her, Sesshoumaru sure has absolutely no idea how to interact with others... "Kagome said say something" I was laughing so hard when I read that part!!!

I can't wait to read what Kagomes offer for a deal will be!


I look forward to your next update!

Eryn (Chapter 20) - Fri 26 Jan 2018

I absolutely adore this story.  Their dynamic is so fun to follow, probably because this is totally me and my coworker! XD Looking forward to more of their antics! 

KShadeslady (Chapter 20) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

Oh...that could be dangerous. A seemingly relaxed Seesh could be a dangerous thing. Very nice update. Thank you. 

Cheyanna (Chapter 20) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

Lol I hope the truce goes well! Can’t wait to read more!!!?

saffi (Chapter 20) - Thu 25 Jan 2018

LOVE. just wish there was more. keep at it!!

KShadeslady (Chapter 19) - Sun 10 Dec 2017

LOLOLOL! Made me grin! Just perfect! Thanks for updating. Cheers!

KShadeslady (Chapter 18) - Sun 03 Dec 2017

The bane of her existence! Too funny. So glad to see a new chapter. Thanks for updating. Cheers!

NovemberDoll (Chapter 18) - Sat 02 Dec 2017

I.m crossing my fingers here... XD

sarah chau (Chapter 18) - Fri 01 Dec 2017

Hilarious!  This is such a cute story!

wiccawoman (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Dec 2017

So glad to see this updated! Please update again soon!  :)

Neelixonee (Chapter 18) - Fri 01 Dec 2017

I love their old married couple bickering!

Pistachio (Chapter 17) - Fri 17 Nov 2017

I love this story so much!!!!

Angela (Chapter 17) - Mon 06 Mar 2017

Hahaha their bantering is just so cute!! LOL can't wait til Sess actualky warms up to her xD

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