I have read this story before. did you decide to edited an updated it's been a long time I hope you do finish it this time
This was a very touching and emotional chapter concerning Kagome's reunion with Shippo. It was very nicely written.
I like how you are developing Shippo's character. Hm, I wonder what Sessho's trying to hide from Kagome already. I also am wondering if Shippo married Rin??? In the feudal era, Shippo would never had gotten away with talking to Sesshomaru the way he did let alone giving him a vailed threat like the one he just gave. Ah...the plot thickens. lol
Your overall writing style, in my opinion, has been developing nicely. Keep up the excellent work you are putting into your stories. I am enjoying reading this story and can hardly wait for the next chapter to come and the next, and the next and the next, etc., etc. you get my drift...lol :)
Glad that she got to reunite with Shippo. I wonder what they're keeping from her though...
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